Reviews for Darkness Dying

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Mercutio's Padamama 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseI think that this story is a wonderful story! I've always wondered about the stories of the Marauders...
Love and Rock Music 2007-12-08 ch 6,	abuseSomeone stole your story and posted it up as their own? Man, people suck sometimes. I just want to say that this story is beautifully done, and it really answers that age-old question, How could Sirius suspect Remus? It's a completely marvelous work, and you have one serious gift. No pun intended.
Love and Rock Music 2007-12-08 ch 5,	abuseI just love this story! Every line gets better and better. And I know that now its long been out of canon, but that in no way decreases its awesomeness. It's brilliant. Peter, dead. In his place, Wormtail. Best line ever.
Love and Rock Music 2007-12-08 ch 4,	abuseDelicious. I absolutely love this line: I’m sorry, Moony. But when the Dark Lord takes over, I’ll do my best to make it up to you. I promise.
Love and Rock Music 2007-12-08 ch 3,	abuseSuperb. I love the way you write for the Death Eater "organization". The sneaky way they worm their way into Peter's life and make him believe that he's already in too deep - perfect. The slow descent into the morally gray and then the morally black is masterfully done. This exchange made me laugh out loud: “Harry!” exclaimed Remus with delight. “This obviously means you’ll be an expert cloak-maker--” “Are you making fun of my son?” warned James. “Of course not, Prongs. I’m making fun of you.”
Love and Rock Music 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseThis is one of the most fantastic stories I've ever read in the expanded Potter universe; in fact, it's been my favorite pre-Harry story for a long time, only I've been to lazy to review! No more - it's time I told you how much I love your story. It's so in tune, well-thought out, and funny. You write for Sirius, Remus, and James so well. Even Peter, whom we never got too much characterization for, is well written. I especially love this line: "The four young men stood grouped tightly around the child as if in awe of him, and Remus thought with a smirk how amused their ten- or even five-years-younger selves would have been to see this spectacle." It's great! You also did wonderfully describing Peter's personality, especially the bit about him not joining in the teasing of whoever's getting it at the time. Fabulous.
Sera dy Relandrant 2007-09-23 ch 1,	abuseSo cute. But isn't Harry's first name just Harry, instead of Harold? Do you read the Red Hen Publications? Your way of putting the characters - brilliant, lovely, logical, understandable in ALL your stories - reminds me of some of those editorials.
Luna 2007-08-29 ch 2, anon.	abuseWhat I love even more is the way you treat Peter. EEp! I love him! I do!
Luna 2007-08-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat is so friggin sweet! I loved it! 'Take it off, take it off, take it all of!' Snortlaugh. My only problem is the 'Harold' - Harry's real name is Harry, not Harold. But that's just me nitpicking. A fantastic story, hjonestly. Worship worship worship
.rEckLeSsLy.cOnFIneD. 2007-08-24 ch 6,	abuseThough this story is quite old, I happened to come across it yesterday and just finished it this afternoon. I must say...wow. I have never read a piece of fiction on this certain subject so in-depth and apt to detail as yours. The characterizations were magnificant (as much as I loathe Peter, I really enjoyed the fact that you actually gave him a personality...and a personality that fits. After all, Moony, Padfoot and Prongs did love him at that time...you've done the best job at that I've ever read) and the slow understanding as to how it all came to be was just perfect. Sad, very much so, but perfect. I absolutely loved this.
the lycans 2007-07-24 ch 6,	abuseI can't find words to tell you how much I love this, I've only read the first chapter, but can't go any further. It is just so sad and tragic, what happens to these four legendary friends. All of them are perfectly in character as well. It's kind of poetic isn't it. all the Marauders dead. I really hope you have read DH, other wise you are going to hate me and I really don't want that to happen
PhoenixPhreak 2007-06-29 ch 6,	abusegreat story!
SuGaRLiLy 2007-02-24 ch 6,	abuseSo I read this maybe one or even two summers ago on a different website (I can't recall which one). On a whim, I decided to look it up here to see if I could find it and reread it. I enjoyed reading it the second time as much as I did the first. This was such an awesome story and I am completely in awe of your amazing writing ability. I loved the tone you used throughout the story and the way you characterized Lily and the Marauders.
InkandPaper 2007-02-07 ch 6,	abuseI read this story months ago, I think on the Werewolf Registry...well, I know I came across it somewhere. Anyway, I remembered it because I loved it so much and so I looked it up on here and re-read it. It's good as I remembered. I never reviewed on whatever site it was, because I was new to fanfiction then and the word 'review' just scared me :) but I'm reviewing now to make up for it! I really did love this story, and its sequels, which I will probably also re-read soon. You portrayed the Marauders perfectly, and wove a great tale. You and three others - Erika, Alphie and Jess Pallas - were the ones who got me into liking fanfiction in the first place. I see from the publication date of your new RENT fics that you're still active; are you planning to write any more Harry Potter fics again? Please tell me if you are! I really hope so. I plan to read the other HP fics of yours that I haven't yet, but still, more would be amazing! lol! Anyway, great story, again!
Elysia1 2007-02-02 ch 6,	abuseKept me away from a sunny day. Loved the story and it's honesty, it's always so hard to see how they suspected each other but you'be made it very clear. Sirius and Remus have such a strange relationship, you've captured it perfectly. Haven't read you other stories but I will when the sun goes down. Ely.

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