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Reviews for: Struts and Frets
La Luna Negra
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
Dammit, you made me cry! 0Sniff0 it's so sad! T.T
But I'm glad it worked out in the end.
Thanks for your effort.
Take care.
JustAnotherCrazyWriter
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
I love this. Lelouch's getting angry at the Guitar Hero thing was a little unexpected, but I guess I could imagine it happening. I like this:

"So go apologize already."

"I think you mean go accept their apology,"

:D And the riddles, they let a lot of other emotions show by just those simple things. I love the reconciliation - how they ended up playing music. Nice band name, by the way! :)
azure orbis
2009-03-04 . chapter 1
There's something about this that I really relate to. Adore how you portrayed Lelouch and Suzaku and the changes that have happened to both of them. The loneliness that Lelouch feels is so...real. I really didn't expect him to blow up over something like Guitar Hero and have such aftereffects, but it was really well-written, especially Lulu's feelings and that scene between him and Suzaku about being each other's first and best friend. Gives it an even more poignant feel when you have to reconcile that they're at opposite ends for more of the anime.
bnm
2009-01-18 . chapter 1
Aww, this was so funny and sweet~!
Charuru
2008-10-06 . chapter 1
Extremely OOC
Garowyn
2008-07-10 . chapter 1
Excellent work.
Serena the Hikari of Love
2008-07-10 . chapter 1
Serena:This story was really good. :3
Dragon of Venus
2008-07-08 . chapter 1
aww, cute :) so, what WAS the answer to that riddle? 'cause I have a feeling it wasn't Lelouch...
MindFuel
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
Such a sweet fic, and everyone was in character too! I liked it a lot. It was nice to read about the Student Council group and their everyday interactions. I had thought something was strange when Suzaku was acting pretty dumb, but I really loved your explanation for that, it made lots of sense.
I must read more of your works.
icarus923
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
i liked it...it was pretty nice
Dear Aerith
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
I really liked this.
Everyone was dead-on right and Suzaku's emotion and how he's so simple yet so not was dead-on as well.
I liked the strain in their relationship, the one that's pretty obvious, (Hello, Lulu is Zero) so blind, yet the one Suzaku is thinking of is hardly what Lulu is thinking of.
I don't know, I just loved how you made this so simple, as if this would happen in an episode or something.
Mm, I like your writing alot.
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