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Minikimii
2009-10-13 . chapter 30
Beautiful. :)
I love it when people write a side of Demyx that's deeper than his lazyass, happy-go-lucky side. Great job~!
Minikimii
2009-10-13 . chapter 23
B'aw. It's so cute! Woman, you make me fansqueal! -laughs-
Minikimii
2009-10-13 . chapter 5
Oh, Freshmen. -laughs- Roxas, you sly devil.
Minikimii
2009-10-13 . chapter 14
alkdjfhkasdfhiuwhfkjas!! I'm undeniably in love with this two-shot.

If I had the money for the paper and the ink, I'd print this out and keep it forever, -laughs-
KnightlyLady
2009-10-01 . chapter 11
The idea of having sex with someone you'd met five minutes ago... Hahaha. I can see how Axel was intrigued, though, I guess. It seems crazy to me. Not only had me just met him, he had sex with him in public. And then was caught by Roxas! Crazy ^-^ I think I maybe am amused by things that should not be amusing, lol. But Roxas still wants to win him back. And I guess that's what matters? :D Onto the next bit.
KnightlyLady
2009-10-01 . chapter 6
Interesting. It's weird to see Axel being seduced, rather than seducing. But, I suppose. I'm annoyed with Roxas for being so stand-offish. Well, for downright rejecting Axel, I guess, haha. I am rather attached to the couple, but... I like trying out new things, lol. Don't know how I feel about Stalker Reno yet, lol. But I liked the story. By the way, this song is awesome. I should get one of her CDs. I've never heard anything bad by her.
KnightlyLady
2009-10-01 . chapter 5
Nice, Roxas. Very sly. That's awesome ^-^

'Axel was doing his Inner Victory Dance in his mind. Too easy, too perfect, too awesome, yes!'

Silly Axel. Like anyone takes advantage of Roxas :D
KnightlyLady
2009-10-01 . chapter 14
Okay, yes, intense (again), but also good.

“You think you’re too much for me? No way. I can handle you.”

Haha, go Sora. He did seem to be taking the sex slave thing pretty seriously, lol.

'A nearly feral growl was his response. “Sora, if you are not naked in the next ten seconds…”'

That made me giggle. But yeah. "I liked it" seems like a silly thing to say here, but... I did :D
KnightlyLady
2009-10-01 . chapter 4
Intense. I never know what to say after reading a sex-ish scene ^-^;;. Except I think I'm going to skip forward to part 2, and then come back. Because Riku was bitter, and Sora wanted more, and I want to read it. Heh. But, the thorn bit was...I liked how it was described, I guess. Oh, and Riku insisting he be able to hear Sora. I can't even imagine being half-okay with doing that in public, lol. Anyway. Goodness in a bottle, on to part 2.
KnightlyLady
2009-10-01 . chapter 3
That was insanely sweet. Poor Demyx. “It’s…not just a rumor I mean…I…I am…gay.” He's so damn cute. And then Zexion's all uber-logical about the whole thing, but... Aw. And then he gets a teacher to come get the kids to back off, because he can't. I just... I melted. It was so cute! ^-^

Keeping the tip of his nose touching Demyx’s, Zexion replied, “Naturally. It would be illogical to refuse.”

*Squee*
KnightlyLady
2009-10-01 . chapter 2
*Blinks a few times* *Bursts into laughter* Hahaha, that was great. I'm not sure whether or not Roxas is teasing them, but either way... Hahaha.

"And I didn’t know about the bathroom, so Reno – thanks, it’s good to know.”

I loved that bit, haha. I'm choosing not to think about how Roxas's going to make Axel and Reno "pay" at the same time, lol. But yeah. It was great. Thanks for the laugh(s) ^-^
KnightlyLady
2009-10-01 . chapter 1
That was sad. But cute. And eventually happy ^-^ Leon taking advantage of Cloud (I know, not really, but still) made me giggle. The bit where he "missed his two-minute mark" really stuck out to me, too, but I'm not sure why. I think I just liked the sentence, and the general picture there. It was easy to see ^-^ Oh, and then Cloud being all, "Woo, PDA, I love you," was good stuff, too. Cute.
hyugatenten
2009-09-27 . chapter 35
*Gaps in shock and excitement before dying of too much shock and excitement*

OMG THIS WAS SO PRATICALLY GOD-LIKE! I kneel in awe before your mighty writing!!

Wow. Just absolutely wow. This is why you (and terra hotaru) are my favorite writers.

Thank you for updating!

-HT
SkoRn3d
2009-09-27 . chapter 6
Wow, I wonder if Roxas will actually be pissed off by this. I can see him being offended at being cheated on -not that he can talk really, he's a chronic flirt- but I wonder if, once they talk about it or whatever, if he'll really actually give a damn??
Fatty
2009-09-04 . chapter 35
This was definitely my favourite chapter :)
Not just because this pairing is HOT but because in this drabble they're all together instead of Reno and Axel hating on another trying to win Roxas.
That was so hot though *drool*

~Fatty (please so another ARR like this?)
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