AW!

I would have loved some snogging at the end, but you did a great job here! I really enjoyed reading it!

( and because I'm me I will inform you that you wrote form twice instead of from, just to spoil the fact that I was going to write an all-positive review for the great story)

r we gonna continue with this

Why do I want to tap him over the head and just tell him to snog the life out of Ianto? lol

Again, great companion to 'Stuck here still'

Very cute. You've described Ianto beautifully. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

Brilliant. I quite enjoyed the way that you started the story; I could see it all happening: the shot slightly blurred, coming from below so we could see Jack's face as he ran, and then it would cut to Ianto and...well...you know what I mean. I could see everything playing out as if it were really an episode of Torchwood- a very short episode perhaps, but an episode none the less. You truely captured the relationship between the two at that point in the series, and their respective personalities. A wonderful read.

-Eden Escher

good angst

I liked that, I'm gonna read the other one now. TTFN

A very good short fic. Effectively covers the early relationship between Jack and Ianto. Well done. And what good action doesn't turn into a stream of consciousness?...