I love the mixture of kinky yet innocent things Edward has Bella do (eat fruit, vacuum a car, etc). I can't tell you how much I enjoy your one shots, especially since they're in Edward's POV, which is my favorite to read. Love it!

Wow. WOW. This was one of THE best almost lemons I've ever read. And yea—who knew Edward was that kinky? ;D My boyfriend was reading over my shoulder, too. He called me a pervert. But I know he imagines that too. ;D

An idea: Edward is a piano teacher(in his fantasy) and Bella's his student. You can imagine what happens... :P

Love the story, update, soon!

—Midnight Freesia

pretty good for a first timer lol :) i liked it.

Whew! Never been so turned on by so much UST in my life.. and of course, EPOV turns me on more so than usual!

Connie

too. cute. I have no fantasy ideas, just PLEASE let them be married in the next chapter!

that was hot! :)

That was DELICIOUS!

doctor edward and paitent bella?

once again, your Edward is delightfully yummy! More, more, we want more!

lol bellas last line was hilarious! really cute and sexy 3

wow- didn't get a chance to say the first time i read this, but this story is hotter then most of the lemons i've read, and no one even takes their clothes off! hot da**! can't wait for the next one!

Sweet! Sexy! Hot! And yet very innocent-just the thing a teenager would do!

Dang, girl, that was impressive. You managed to make it innocent and naughty at the same time. Sigh.

wow that was hot! i have a suggestion but it's not my own,i got the idea from another twilight story actually. in the story they talk about eating chocolate off of your lover and bella thinks about that ice cream topping that hardens when it comes into contact with the cold and edwards body temp being so low... do you see where i'm going with this? anyway i think it would be fun.

I will never look at Raspberries the same again...YUMMY!