 wolfrevenant 7/28/10 . chapter 1Loved this! Great writing, good pace. I listened to Come With ME whilst reading and it gave the whole thing a different flavour as it were. This is how I see Heero and Duo. Killer line from Duo of ive been hurting since we met. That line really got to me and I could really see him sitting slumped defeated in the jeep as Heero took him back. Lovely way of writing in both their point of views, and I liked how it was Heero who said those three words and how he had to battle himself to admit he would cherish Duo. I felt it was very much in the story that he did care for Duo very deeply, the grabbing of Duo's hand, his sleeping in the same bed...poor Heero and his inablity to deal with emotions. Made a terrific story and so glad you shared. Adding his to my favorites! |
 mannd1068 10/26/09 . chapter 1Excellent story! |
 Kura-sama 1/21/09 . chapter 1I love this story. The emotions were so deep and so well portrayed, it made me cry.
The song is also very appropriate and utilized very well, adding another layer to the story.
Wonderfully written. |
 pink 1/20/06 . chapter 1 Sad, but I love the way it has been writen. Some of the words (not the lyrics) are beautiful in the way that they express and evoke so much emotion. |
 RC 3/8/05 . chapter 1 You made me sad. I love the story,but me now sad. I hope you write more like it. |
 Wan wingu no tenshi 7/23/04 . chapter 1Very well written.
I really enjoyed reading it. |
 Hellcat81 12/16/03 . chapter 1i absolutely love the narrating style. for once song lines didn't annoy me. |
 Hotaru7 11/24/03 . chapter 1OMG! I had tears in my eyes! *saying alot* that was really good! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
ps: i luv like all of your stories :D |
 EliD 12/24/02 . chapter 1 wow that was powerful -_- made me thing, of Nata that really was heartwrenching because I could almost feel his pain his torment, his want *sight* I really enjoyed that story and it will for ever remain in my thoughts. |
 chibiukyou 7/22/02 . chapter 1*worships you* O.M.G. I LOVE THIS! . |
 pewp 7/10/02 . chapter 1Adorable! It actually made me cry when Heero was being so mean! lol. I'm a sap. ANYWAYS, you are so my favorite author. |
 Val Mora 6/2/02 . chapter 1*sniffles* You nearly made me cry! (this is a good thing) I love this story! |
 yuki-chan 4/11/02 . chapter 1 A little hard to read, but the end is extremly sweet, I really love this fic. |
 Kaosu Buraindo 1/8/02 . chapter 1Tears! I have tears in my eyes. That was so sad and angsty. *sniffles* Poor Duo. I would have kicked Heero between the legs and run off a long time ago. Good story, keep up the great work. |
 nitid 12/14/01 . chapter 1 *sniff* beautiful angst. I loved how you intertwined bits of scenes from EW and the series, showing them from Duo's pov. I wanted to give poor Duo a hug. Heero's actions at the end helped, and he may grow to be more demonstrative, but somehow I think Duo will have to accept that Heero will always be somewhat reticent about showing emotions. |