Aww this story is sweet! im glad that its a no incest story because as someone said in the other reviews, people had either done that or gone gay. Im glad that there are still some people out there that can make a good story with an older brother and a younger sister without making it discusting. you did a good job keep it up! btw i love William Moseley!

i love big brother stories but this is just...WOW
ONCE AGAIN WOW,katie

Good a no inscest story. It seems like half of the people here have either gone that way or the gay way. Nice to see some decent people still on here.

Aw, this is cute. I like it. Well done!
~redrose7856

Aw! So sweet! I love Peter and Lucy stories! There simply aren't enough. I like how you talked about the "something" that makes people think.

Aww, I love Peter/Lucy sibling fluff, it makes me really want a big brother like Peter. Lucy's soo lucky. I love to explore the relationship they share. You did a good job of that. :)