 Colton M. H. 2008-07-24 . chapter 2I like it. I really like it. Some advice though:
Make the chapters longer (Not needed, but sometimes helps)
And has the annoying habit of making you have to have like four lines in between paragraphs, or they turn into one. Annoying, yes, but it is how it works I'm afraid.
P.S. It's Colton the Last at Zelda Universe, you don't know me though, of course. |