Holy moley, are these two cute! You have portrayed them so well -- Marshall would definitely risk his career to keep Mary safe, and Mary would definitely jump in after him. I especially liked the scene where Mary was found sipping drinks in Marshall's kitchen!

That was a really great, fun and sweet story! You have our wonderful Marshall Mann down pat. :) Nice stuff!

:D:D:D Me likey. It was very... artfully ended. And, of course, being the endless IPS ff abyss that I am, comes the request/demand/plea:

Write more!

Loved it! This story is amazing! The ending was a bit weird, but totally perfect! It was a bit strange, but in exactly the way they are! Adding to favs! You rock for writing such a great fic when there arent many great ones at this time!

that was so beautiful and fraught with 6 kinds of tension. my heart almost exploded. make a sequel.

He carried in his waistband and on his ankle - he carried what? A knife, a gun, his lunch! Please update this and proofread. Thanks,

Wow, what a great story! Marshall is my favorite, and I think you did a good job of capturing his personality. And Mary was spot on, as well. (Especially the way she took out her would be rapist. Pure Mary.) Thanks for sharing. :-)

wow i liked this a lot its really sweet!

Hey, I LOVED your story, especially the ending. Artfully done, and I loved the way everything built up and then blossomed so beautifully. A lot of stories like this are hard to believe, but yours really came together wonderfully. I would love to write a story with you sometime. My email is . Later! :) Melody

Now this was a wonderful story, as in with beginning, middle and end. A real story, really well written.

Characters stayed in character.
Action well thought out.
Crummy bad guys.

I really, really liked it.
Can you tell?

This is a totally exciting story!

I am so into it!

Excellent job.

ARGH

Our heroes are in a bind.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story. Marshall is definitely a protector and that shone through this story so well. I love the idea of Marshall and Mary as a couple, so this hit the spot. Thanks so much for this last chapter allowing them to find each other in this special way.

Dang, this is a good story.

I am really into it!

OMG, this fic has left me pretty much speechless! You sent these two on one hell of an adventure, and I am loving how they came out of it! And this last chapter with the beach talking and that nibbling thing *melts and insert fangirl! squee here* Beautiful work!