My grandmother died this morning. This chapter made me laugh. Thank you.

I like it, but at the same time I'm afraid of Shino's feelings. You kinda of confused me a bit earlier, you accidently wrote "Kiba" instead of "Shino", so Kiba was talking with Kiba. Luckily you are pretty good at showing their different personalities through their words and I was able to differentiate.

Keep up the good work, I do hope this is not the end.

B. Rae

Interesting start, though tenten's behavior is a little objective; However I look forward to continue reading this in the near future.

“Oh, who cares about him. Neji, I didn’t bring you here to make out with you. I brought you here to break up with you.”

Wow, that was really blunt, if fact, the next few lines, didn't feel all like what the characters would actually say. It was just way too OOC for my taste. =(

Oh wow. I never thought I'd be a ShinoTen fan, but you've gone and converted me! I definitely love the way you've made Shino, mowhawk and all, because from what I've seen of him from other stories, he's never that cool. But your story makes him awesome!
Please update soon; I absolutely love it and can't wait to read more!
PS: The Raunchiness is good, I swear! It adds passion and excitement that sometimes plain old kissing just doesn't get at. So good job!

“Kiba, we have no proof of that,” Kiba stated.

I would just like to point out that SHino's name was Kiba until the next timeskip.

It was like, a little less than halfway through. about three paragraphs worth. Just thought I would point it out.

Who has sex in the middle of a fight!? Really? Or sex-fight? That is one of the most original ideas I have ever seen.

Sweet, a fight and a make-up all in one chapter. I wonder if Neji really believed Shino when he said that Tenten was just a friend? Was she just waiting for the others to leave before approaching Shino? Sorry, I tend to get over-excited and ask alot of questions about things I'm curious about. Please post a new chapter soon.

Shino's relationship with his dad is hilarious, but serious in a way too. I hope I'll get to see what's up with Tenten and her mom. So, Tenten just EXPLORES with the different clan boys huh? But I get the feeling Shino is a bit more special to her than that. Though I wonder what he'd do if he found out what she's been up to. Oh well, update soon.

It's nice to actually see a Shino/Tenten with them both having their own personal issues. I hope their next encounter will be as amusing as this one was. Please update soon.

WOW!

Outstanding, and suprisingly funny.

Shibi is freaking hilarious.

Keep up th good work,

Miss-Monster-Kimono

lol, not enough good shino fics. either way, thanks

Haha! Wow...this chapter was nicely written. Looks like Shino's getting more luck than Shika! Poor Shika-kun. I can't wait for the updates of both this and the Ten Step Program. I believe you also said your friend was helping you with the fight scenes (10 Step Program) since she was making a comic, and I'd love the link to check it out once it's available. Ja ne!

Your stories are so kawaii. I love how you manage to keep everyone in character, and still add humor. I can't wait for more!

Hey, you updated! Alright!

Sweet chapter, Please update again soon.