Luvin'luvin'luvin'luvin' this! Uwa~! Can't express my joy enough... Good plot, nice interpretation. Hikaru is lovely. Now if only the story moved a bit faster...

so continue

A kid sewing at two years old... Dang, most kids are still working on their speech and potty training then! Keep up the good work, dark

I like this :)
I don't usually like OC unless they are a side character that doesn't show up much but this is quite good. I like Hikaru. I want more I enjoyed your story so far, hope you can keep it up and update soon

yo, man i am lovein this story!! u gotta update and soon, cuz i was all up in this story.oh now ima b looking for this story every day,lol. update soon plz!XD

good chapter update soon ^_^ Ja.

Wow. Itachi and Kakashi are going to be think 'What the heck?' About Naruto now.


Please update soon.

Wow.

This is interesting.

must be tough to go through that is he still alive sorta like kyu an can his soul be transfered to a clone so he can live?

Itachi! No! What the hell is wrong with him? Did it have anything to do with Naruto saying Hikaru was still alive?

Update soon! ^.^

aw ur so mean D=...HOW COULD U STOP HERE! IT WAS GETTING GOOD! T_T...lol please hurry up or i will throw kunai's at u *sharpens kunai's* hehe

Wow...just wow. I love the idea of this story its amazing! I have no idea on how to guess whats going to happen next. I love Ita/Naru but then what about Hikaru? What happened to Itachi?! and what will Naru-chan do with another voice in his head? Oh the everlasting questions of life...
Good Luck Writing!!

Wow that didn't happen how I expected it to. Hehe, I am looking forward to more.

more please