It's hard to believe this story has only 3 reviews. I think you did a great job at keep them in character in a situation like this. Writing a One Piece story that's supposed to have a great amount of seriousness in it is not an easy task considering the light-hearted nature of the source material, but you pulled it off just fine. Very bitersweet and I love Sanji's last line. So very Sanji.

Aww! *sniffle* I must confess that I tend to prefer Sanji/Zoro slash but this was just lovley. So sad and poignant. Going to add it to my favorites.

omg
so sad!
xx

HAY YOU!
Naw, it wasn't OOC at all, I thought you captured their characters quite nicely. Nami and "her boys" is so aw. And I felt bad for Sanji, but I really think of their relationship like this. Oddly enough, I see can like, Robin/Sanji before i see these two.-okay not Robin/Sanji...well maybe. Dunno. I'm getting confused, but I liked it, which is all that matters. :P

Isn't that fan-for-all happy fun times?