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Reviews For: Dragonmorphs

The Shang Kudarung 2008-08-30 ch 3,	abuseI'm NOT going to sugar-coat this, and I'm NOT going to be 'beating around the bush', as they say. By the looks of your reviews, they've already asked politely and I have had enough. 1. Run this through Spellcheck. YES, even your Author's Notes. I can't BELIEVE you used the number '2' instead of the word 'to' when Marco was talking. If nobody can read what you're writing, they won't read it at all. YES, you may say that you CAN read it, but it even gives me an immense headache. The thing with me is that I read Author's Notes too, and if that's hard to read HOW will I concentrate hard enough on the actual STORY? If you don't have frickin' spellcheck, DOES! Aren't they smart? 2. READ OVER THE FRICKIN' THING! If you can't run it over in spellcheck, at least have the sense to READ OVER IT! You are breaking the Story Guidelines, ya'know? No, seriously, and I copy-and-paste from the Writer's Etiquette: 1. Spell check all stories and poems. There is no excuse for not doing this. If you do not have a word processor that has the spell checking feature, use a search engine such as to find one. 2. Proofread all entries for grammar and other aspects of writing before submission. 'Hot off the press' content is often riddled with errors. No one is perfect but it is the duty of the writer to perform to the best of his/her ability. At least read the frickin' Guidelines before you accept them! They aren't THAT difficult. And I know you can understand what I'm saying now, because when you make an account you have to be thirteen. 3. Aie-yai-yae-yi! Have it MAKE SENSE! (Okay, I spelt 'sense' wrong twice just then, and I fixed it.) HOW CAN IT MAKE SENSE when you write something like this: "w could not belive our eyes. the dragon was red and had a yellow stomach. he had black spicky hair with green on the very edge. his arms and legs were extremely skinny. he was very thin. his wings were 3 times the width of his body. he did not look very strong, yet still i felt like he could do some damage. His tail was so long it would be able to reach the back of his head. he was y feet tall and flew in a way that made it look like he would usually be standing on two legs." Seriously? That is the work of a fivev-year old. Ableit a five-year-old with an extensive knowledge of words. 4. "Three other stories going on outside of fanfiction"? May I ask what they are? If you write on FictionPress I highly doubt you would be writing them. GET OFF MSN/AIM/YIM, YOU IMBECILE! Really. Do we want to READ your Naruto/Animorphs Crossover when you CAN'T EVEN WRITE THIS ONE PROPERLY?!? I wouldn't mind you using chatspeak in your author's notes, but AT LEAST get capital letters on sentences! Okay, I THINK I'm done ranting. By the way, thanks for letting me borrow your fic to let of steam. You can't get this review deleted either, because I am logged in! Hah! Read the Guidelines, please. All I want you to do, is actually _read_ them. Pretty please. I'm tired now, and out of breath. And I'm begging. Pretty pretty pretty pretty please. Do you have ESL at your school? Well, ask the teacher if you can join. Last words of advice: Get this BETA'd. Seriously. It could save your life. I will come back and comment again. I can promise you that. Writing is the source of inspiration! Ky, xoxo P.S. At least respond to this review. I don't care if it's a "I hate you" or whatever, but I just want to know that you've read it. Twice. In fact, if you have read it twice, tell me what the fifth sentence in point four was. Please?
DarkPaladin000 2008-08-30 ch 3,	abuseNIce, but from now on can you make the chapters a bit longer? Anyway, I'm wondering what'll happen next. If you want suggestions have the next chapter be in Jake L and explain everything quickly because that usually gets boring.
lord maul160 2008-08-29 ch 3,	abuseThis one was good. You need to work on your chapter length. Use a spellcheck also. And you also need to use instead of () for thought-speak. Pretty good though.
Adriannrod Svit-Kona Sama 2008-07-15 ch 2,	abuse... You need longer chapters. More capitalization and punctuation, and a bit of BETA ing. How about a 3rd person point of view? Also, for a good length chapter, you need 3 pages on Microsoft Word.
lord maul160 2008-07-14 ch 2,	abuseOkay, you REALLY need to work on your chapter length. I read these two chapters in less than a minute. I shouldn't finish for ten minutes.
Lexithiathenewanimorph 2008-07-10 ch 2,	abuseThis was good so far, umm just to be nice I will say Cassie, we dont get to see her narrate much. So yeah, cool story through and I know I already said something about your story so sue me.
BugzAttack 2008-07-08 ch 2,	abuseThe chapters arnt long enough for me to see your skill with dialoge, but so far it seems pretty good. However you have hardly any discription which bugs me.
Riza-san 2008-07-07 ch 2,	abuseNot bad! perhaps slightly better punctuation might be needed but thats about it. I have also wrote a ADJLXAnimorphs crossover before. There great fun aren't they?

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