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Reviews for: Evolving Friendships
Stella Solaris
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
I liked it very much indeed =D and don't worry about the characterisation. I thought it was quite good and either way, we're never exactly the same when we're in love =P
good work
Moon Of Jupiter
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
Your fic really grew on me!
I liked how it buit up slowly decending towards the end and the title sums up your story pretty much.
In other words i really felt the evolution.
I thought they were very close to their character afterall Karin had grown-up, and she would've been more mature and composed compared to when she was younger. Toushiro,was perfect (well at least i thought). But keep up the goodies! Seriously liked your writing and this fic. XD
FizzySkittles
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
Aw how cuties! That was sweet I liked their relationship it was all kisses and fluffiness :D

This guy has a fan club? Oh man, that's just weird. And creepy XD

Haha. Anyway, you rocks!

Mwah.
yonne1104
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
i loved it and adored the way they acted after the kiss never even thought of such a thing n wen they were on the wall, that was my favorite of all... hitsukarin shall prevail!
syNemYoA
2008-07-11 . chapter 1
that was definitely cute,.,. :D
and i liked how mature Karin seemed to be in here,.,. ;)
well,.,. i guess that's because she's already in high school anyway,.,. ;D
Ming24
2008-07-10 . chapter 1
oh!! i really like this...don't worry about characterization, it's set in the future, their personalities have to change :) by the way... i think u did a good job with Toushiro
miikka-xx
2008-07-09 . chapter 1
It was so cute!

You kept Toushiro so in caracter, I couldn't believe it! Karin was abit sappy but the timeline probably changes a few things about personality.

Honestly, I thought Ichigo was gonna pop out and beat the crap out of Toushiro when they kissed but the Fan Club was a nice addition anyways.

Great little oneshot. I liked it.
GrnEydDvl
2008-07-08 . chapter 1
I LOVED this! Your characterization was great, and I loved the addition of the fangirls. Adding the little bit with the phone was cute too. I really liked the end, and the fact that they didn't get totally mushy, but still acted like themselves. Very well done!
Tsuzari
2008-07-08 . chapter 1
- nice and great
- It is so cute
- romantic
- sweet
- Rin-hime ^^,
TXJ
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
I'm not really a Toushirou fan, but you've done a wonderful job with this piece.
ShikallllTema
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
aww, i really liked when she played with his cell phone
so cute
u did a great job ^^
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