excellent...

very good and very funny.

Pure simbling cuteness!I laughed so much when reading this fic, its so original and fun, really cute, I love it!Great fic!

That's well cute

This was written...back in '08.

According to what your profile says, this puts you anywhere between the ages of 11 to 13, yeah?

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fhozoajdoososooakdncoedk. WHAT. Are you a frigging prodigy? Like, WHAT? Raging jealousy here, raging jealousy. I will kill with my bare hands for that sort of talent. /emocorner

AHMYGOSH, shall I resume creepy stalking? (By the way, nice story.)

I'm still laughing at the frog-with-down-syndrome-voice! Amazing fic!

awesome story! i loved how their portrait turned out. the best portraits are those that capture the heart and spirit of its subjects. is there a fanart of this somewhere? i'd really love to see one.

So funny! Great job!

rofl poor Su, Lu, Pete, and Ed. lol

Great fic, i couldn't keep myself from laughing several times :)

Hey, well done with the story, haha you can be glad I'm not one of those flamers and that I'm a very good critique concerning stories. Good luck with any other stories you are making at the moment

The ending was not awkward at all. It was beautiful. I love it. Amazing job.

That was really cute. :) I really liked the ending.

This really made my day! I was laughing from start to finish and I am so adding this to my favs! For a first fic, this is really good! (much better than mine I'll tell you that.) I'm going to read more from you on your profile! (that's where I found this...) Please write more soon!

Now that was Fun, thanks.