 Georgshadow 2009-07-21 . chapter 1You write Marilyn very well! It's definitely believable.
Also, I've never thought about Joel/Marilyn as a pairing before, but I think I like it.
=] |
 Vampire Freak at Heart 2009-07-18 . chapter 1I love it!
Love,
Magen |
 Romeobytes 2008-11-16 . chapter 1I like this. It's like a quick shot of inspiration...I like the Maggie view point too.. |
 Historybuff 2008-10-24 . chapter 1Haha! Though, as you said, it's a rather unlikely pair, it's good for a laugh. I always wondered what went on in Marilyn's mind. I like how you added actual dialogue from the show. He does wear blue a lot. And it's not likely that he would ever notice anyway, even if she DID feel as you wrote. *Evil grin* |
 literaryfreak 2008-08-02 . chapter 1Aw. Marilyn with a crush on Joel, I can kinda see that. You got her style down:) |
 baseballfan44 2008-07-18 . chapter 1Ha ha. I never even thought of Marilyn and Joel. But it was cute and it made me laugh. Nice job! |