I liked this, but I though it was going to come to something more. It didn't really feel like a reflective piece at the beginning. Still, I loved the memory with Thayet. Thanks for writing!

ok, abyssgirl here again. the errors...
from the first paragraph: you spell 'Kally' wrong double 'l'. and 'Kmir' is the name of the tribes of Sarain. 'Kmiri' is something which describes a trait or something belonging to them. I'd pick the latter. actually, the 'Kally' thing is rather consistent throughout the whole piece. oh! "The Carthakian diplomat i think it's supposed to be Carthaki... but if it isn't, please let me know. 'mid-riff one word, not two.

see, not too many.

good, but you need to proofread for spelling errors.