Reviews for On the Fast Track

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soulman3 2008-08-27 ch 1,	abuseNot a bad story.It keep me interested in ready the whole story.
Shrike176 2008-08-26 ch 11,	abuseReally great story, loved the ending. Hope to see a sequel sometime soon!
Michael Howard 2008-08-26 ch 11,	abuseA very satisfying conclusion to a first rate Kim Possible story. Glad to see the adventures of this particular corner of the KP Universe will continue!
xyzisme 2008-08-26 ch 11,	abuseGood work! This hints at a sequel!! Just a small edit - Shakespeare is spelt like this. I really enjoyed the story - and it was the perfect length. Thanks for a great read!
Comet Moon 2008-08-25 ch 11,	abuseFarewell So long Aveishane (No idea if I spelled that right) Ado We're gathered here today to celebrate the passing of Erik/Smite. A true scum bucket (Which is what he was placed in on the schuttle) Many knew him well. Boogers. The residue on under Rim of toilets. And all the maggots and filth that pollutes our world. May he burn in agony for all time Three cheers HOORAY HOORAY HOORAY. Maybe you can have Team Possible give Mann a second chance if he's needed to take down O'Shea. I see a powerful battlesuit coming Nice chapter. Though why not give Rufus his own spot in the house A dirt covered, plastic tunnel paradise for him? Nice ending, look forward to more Ja ne Jim
screaming phoenix 2008-08-25 ch 11,	abuseWhat a great way to end this story happy ending for Kim and Ron, justice for Mann and O’Shea and a little teaser of something that could be troubling in the future. Can we hope we haven’t seen the last of the younger O’Shea? This was a fine job you did here and I hope to see more work of this quality from you in the future.
CajunBear73 2008-08-25 ch 11,	abuseSo sad this one had to end, but you left a few high notes as this faded out. Some closure and a few loose ends tied up, but a few threads still running around for now. Glad that Erik was finally dealt his death blow and put away permanently. Kim deserved that event. Ron's finally getting the respect he deserves and recognition for what he contributes in this. Abby will do her best to praise that team from her group. Wedding coming up? Good, they're due. Looks like you've been thinking about doing what Comet Moon subtly suggested: SEQUEL! Yay! I hope... Rick O'Shea is staging himself to blindside Kim and Ron. Didn't he see what happened to Erik? Boy will never learn. Stupidity and arrogance really runs in that family. Good run, enjoyed it very much and hope to see some more from you in the future! CajunBear73
Katsumara 2008-08-25 ch 11,	abuseFantastic fantastic final chapter. I loved how you wrapped up everyone's plot, and even opened us up for a new one with Rick. Man, he's such a bastard. D: I hope he gets what is coming to him. As far as Kim and Ron, haha. I can so picture Ron saying "Honey, I'm home!" every time he gets home. Poor Rufus, having to hide while they neck, and do youknowwhat. xD I loved this story so much. One of my favorites on here for real. I have a ton of stories favorited, but I can see myself coming back to this one and rereading it a bunch. :D I hope this isn't the last thing you do. You're an awesome writer. :) Keep up the awesome work.
spectre666 2008-08-25 ch 11,	abuseGreat story. Nice to see the monkey master come into his own. With KP reacting positively instead of jealously. Please keep this AU going, I think you've got a winning universe. Spectre
Donteatacowman 2008-08-25 ch 11,	abuseGood closure and ending with a possible sequel in mind, but there are two things that I think were OCC: Kim and Ron moving in together and doing... things... and especially Kim's parents' approval. Plus the Monkey Master scene... I think it didn't live up to its full potential and had their reactions not quite them. Something was wrong there, I think. Other than those, awesome story! Thanks for writing!
Kwebs 2008-08-25 ch 11,	abuseGreat ending to a great story. Betty was great here, talking to Abby. What Jenn was able to do for Ron was beyond what I thought would happen. Nice lead in for a sequal as well. I look forward to it when you get the time. :) Thanks for writing this story. Keep it up Waveform!
Sentinel103 2008-08-25 ch 11,	abuseWaveform thanks, I enjoyed it. Soon to be married Kim and Ron are getting on with their life, O'Shea Jr looks like he's planning on bugging them. In my humble opinion maybe he should just leave the country before more bad stuff happens to him. Mann will probably get probation after a couple of years, so we'll have to seewhat happens. O'Shea the elder looks like he's going to have a bunch more problems and with his son becoming vengefull I expect Jr will join daddy. Oh, and Erik is where he belongs too Looks like you're setting up for another round of stories, good I can't wait. Thanks for all, Larry (Sentinel 103)
xyzisme 2008-08-25 ch 10,	abuseThis is a really great story. You've made it a lot of fun to read too!
Donteatacowman 2008-08-24 ch 10,	abuseGood job! Very awesome fight scene; you're good at writing those, apparently. Thanks for posting!
Kwebs 2008-08-24 ch 10,	abuseGreat Chapter, the fight was great. Sensei's comment sounds like forshadowing of another story, Is it? :) KIm and Ron are going to be moving on with life. Thanks for a great story. Looks forward to your next update. Keep it up Waveform!

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