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bookish327
2009-12-04 . chapter 1
Great fic.

I'd actually wondered about the feminine hygiene products issue when I was reading the book. Did Jared include that in the "necessities" that he and the others would look for when they went on their supply raids? (It's hard to imagine Jared doing that.) However, what would the alternative be? Going back to the methods used in the era BEFORE tampons and pads? I also wondered about razors. Did women shave their legs and underarms in the caves? One would assume so, since they ARE wearing shorts and all, but I guess one shouldn't take that for granted because there ARE some women in the world who still wear shorts or skirts and don't shave. Also, how often would the men be able to shave because they'd probably have to ration razor blade-usage, unless they stumbled across some huge cache of them in a warehouse or something like that? Also, I would assume that the couples in the caves were sexually active (despite how little real privacy or sound-proofing they had), so I would assume that condoms would be fairly necessary to for those still in their child-bearing years. So, I was surprised that the four men in this fic were so shocked by the sight of tampons and condoms. However, I do realize that most men like to remain oblivious to items of a personal nature, if they aren't the ones having to use them. :-)

Anyway, I enjoyed your fic both because I'd already wondered about how these people had handled these situations and also because your fic was well-written and entertaining. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us. :-)
Morgana Onirica
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
hahahahahahaha XD
very funny \o
renochick
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
Very funny one shot. Made me laugh out loud.
Jacob's Imprinted
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
XDXDXD Oh, that was god.

I like how you threw the condoms in at the last second. I was wondering if Melanie and Jared ever got to experience that particular pleasure.

Is that true though? About the cycles? *looks up*

DEAR GOD IT IS. Well, the men of the world are screwed. Remind me never to live in close proximity of other women. Ever.
Gii3.Kipit-Sicret
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
haha. funny!
RawSugarX23
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
BWAHAHAHA Ian turned tomato red! Hilarious!! I love it! Two-shot please! or maybe more! We need more humor for The Host.
Jane Humen
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
LMFAO OH MY GOD I'M DYING. AH.
Twoshot! Twoshot!
Mikii Cullen
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
Loved it!
I laughed a lot ^^
Thank you for writing it!
baronessie
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
Haha that was funny... I'm glad I found this one, I was a little tired of reading dramatic/romantic fics all the time.
darkmousie16
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
xiao dear, this is SO you, i'm laughing out loud as I read it. Very nice indeed. :)

Tell me when you get back from college land so we can hang out.
Vampwizard
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
HILARIOUS!
Writting2StayHalfSane
2009-05-18 . chapter 1
“Do you know what tampons are used for?"
“No, I didn’t actually,”
LOL. I laughed so hard. Great fic!
Kkatie
2009-04-24 . chapter 1
I love this! So hilarious! OMG I was cracking up the whole time I read this...WOW. LOLOLOLOLOLOL! :-)
Shirakawa Myself
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
Wow, this made me laugh so much. I love it! Melanie and Wanda's teamwork, ganging up against the boys, is ace, and your writing style flows really well, yet keeping them all in character. Awesome ^^
sleepthroughthestatic
2009-04-04 . chapter 1
omg i just died laughing! that was awesome!
haha i loved it =]
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