i loved it great story

It's a good cheesy, I liked it.

I like cheese, extra-cheese with pepperoni, and a bottle of coke. Hey,I though it was worth reading.

lol! that was cute

Mwahahahahahahahaha! Hahaha! Kekekekeke! Haa haa! Your right that was cheesy. But in a good cheesy not a bad cheesy, get my drift? Well I don't I'd love it if you could explain it to me. Hee hee!-Lisa

IT WAS CUTE!:)

hehe. Funny! I especailly liked the part with Trunks (of course, I like everything having to do with Trunks!) lol! I've read several of your stories and I like them a lot!

Meredith

LOL...hey, are you still gonna write that chibi pan fic?

that was really cute! good job! .*wink!*

That was funny... I really liked it... uhh... 'nuff said...

Very cute! Nice story! _

Awwwwwwwww! Twas so cute! I loved it! Don't worry, my fics are at least 1000 times more cheesy than yours could ever be.

YAAAAYYYYYYYYYY! that was AWESOME!

have a groovy day _ AND MAY THE FICS BE WITH YOU!

There's hints of Videl/Gohan which is my favorite couple. That was so wonderful. That was the bestest story I ever read!