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Reviews for: Assorted Adventures
FPWAaBTGWIS
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
My, what an ending! Very well written, though! I like the length of your descriptions, as well as dialogue.

Keep it up!

Nice job!
Connor Kent
2009-08-07 . chapter 3
Wow. So far I like this chapter and the first one the best. Great stories, your a great writer.
Rainsong of SkyClan
2009-06-26 . chapter 4
PLEASE continue! I really like these stories. Its pretty hard to find people who watch Discovery Kids on this site. Great work, especially on the Poggle one.
ThunderRiver411
2008-10-22 . chapter 4
Nice story. You know it's hard trying to find people who watch Discovery Kids on this site. I've been doing it all day. Nice story. ^_^

PS: Check out my story. It's a Pokemon story, but there are links to a Discovery Kids show in voices I have planned for my own characters.

Continue soon.
Miloflygon
2008-10-20 . chapter 4
Oh! Good work, very good work. The Poggle and Silver-Spider was the best, in my opinion, since it gave 2 different point-of-veiws. This is one of my fav stories. "The Future Is Wild" is my all-time fav show! U should do 1 involving my fav creature...
THE OCEANPHANTOM! I seriosly LOVE those things!
Anna Cole
2008-10-14 . chapter 3
Great fic! I reaaly liked it! How bout' doing one for Megasquid?
Treehuggerme
2008-09-23 . chapter 2
Please forgive my late, late review! I love your work!

Aww, that was such a good story. I could actually see it as a an old babookari folk tale to tell to the young on's.

Anyways, sorry again for being so late. I'll try to keep up!
Neo-byzantium
2008-08-30 . chapter 3
Interesting stories thus far.

The Poggle one made me sad. At least in the end, the Poggle character ensured that the spiders wouldn't get her. It goes to show how cruel nature can be sometimes.

The Babookari one was alright but the best chapter thus far has to be the one with the spitfire bird. It had interesting interaction between various characters and showed the other side of the equation in terms of the feud between the Spitfire Birds and their cousins, the False Spitfire Bird.

After seeing the episode of "Future is Wild" that showed this feud, I figured that the Spitfire Birds might be resentful towards their false cousins for stealing their identities in order to survive. This fanfic confirms it.

In any case, perhaps you should do a chapter concerning the falconfly or even one involving the Sharkopaths and Rainbow Squid.
Treehuggerme
2008-07-08 . chapter 1
Yay! Yay! Not only my most favorite show, but from the animals' point of view! YES! Man, I hope they make a category soon. Maybe it'll be a bit more popular!

Anyways, what a cliffhanger! Or... jumper... :) That makes me want another chapter, no doubt!

As for the next animal you could do, I love the Babookari. Just a suggestion.

Keep it up! Good work!
FullDizz
2008-07-08 . chapter 1
This is really good! I like it a lot!
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