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Reviews for: Stake Out
missotaku12313134213
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
di-did u really hear voices?! but still i died lafin at this! lol i member this 1 tim wen my 2 friends slpt over and we got drunk on soda and almost suffocated lafing
CandyGirl999
2008-07-10 . chapter 1
For the record Hiashi is Hinata's father not her uncle. And second this was actually pretty funny for something that actually happened, especialy the part were Tenten says that a pedophile would have a hard time getting her pants off; that was the funniest part! ^_^ Oh and about the voice who knows, maybe your friend has a ghost in her house...
kataang013
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
omg.that really good. u should finish it
10 tailed wolf
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
asowem story keep it up
MikaUchiha
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
Who was it really or did you ever find out!? Lol! Great story though! It was pretty funny!

~MikaUchiha
Rosepetals and Strife
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
That was hilarious. I really liked the description and such. It sort of makes me feel like literate people can flock to the Internet...

Did you find out who the person was? And, it wasn't too bad with the OOC. I thought that Hinata was a little bold, but other than that, it was great.

Oh, and, what was the little girl for? I found it quite odd that both of them would hear it, but that's just me.
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