RAWR! UPDATE!

(Like I can talk!)

"Lusciously"? Ew! >_<;;

Fascinating story, by the way.

Heehee, I like the word gobsmacked!

Interesting... I'll be following this...

Please continue! I am very intrigued with this story, many open ended questions and those darn cliff hangers that have me reading through each chapter :P Great job!

:D an update!! Huzzah! ^__^ the Ryo and Pharaoh piece was cute. XD a confused yami is always adorable to picture!!

Anyways, great job! Excited for more as always! Hope your burns feel better :)

-TL

awesome chapter. update soon please.

ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER!!
GREAT JOB!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

your friend
-DeaDea-

Keep it up, Nakama! (but don't forget to do your homework! -wink-)

WOW! Keep up the good work!! I am VERY anxious to see what happens next! :D

nice to see what happend to Yami, keep up the good work

As I was reading your story my eyes started to burn and water I like couldn't figure out why! Then after a small while I came to the realization I kept forgetting to blink!! XD It hurts when you do that! XP But yeah, I stared at the page too hard but I was like: *"NO! I can't!! Sentence...almost...finished! AGH!* And then you shut the eyes swivel them around awhile and then right back to starin' at the page!! X__X Such an idiot I am at times.

Well, obviously you held my interest! XD But then it ended and all I could think of was "crap." I was all into it. The scene with Ryo and Yami was enjoyable! ^_^ Poor Yami, the delicious torture must continue XD!

ANYWAYS!! Sorry for the long anicdote. I'm excited for the next chapter!! Update soon! Cause you're awesome!! XD

-TL

good so far ^^
may u can but something about Atem's past... just a thought ^^;
good job so far.

coolio, plz keep going soon

was it the puzzle? that was very good. keep it up.