No peanut butter stuck to the roof of my mouth *crying*

nice story by the way

*more crying*

Griffin remineds me of myself

by the way is it normal to sit readin fan fics and eating peanut butter from the jar cause thats what im doing

Really good so far!
I hope you continue this!

awesome!

WOW! i like this alot it was if it was a scene from a new jumper book very good. i hope you finish it and get it published. i would defiantly buy it> :)

Cool. But i thought she was a jumper.

Keep going! it's awesome!

Great start!

i like the story so far! its really good! i cant wait for the next update!

Excellent story, I do hope you decide to post more soon m'dear

Cool story so far, can't wait for updates. ^^

I'm hooked and I can't wait to read more please up-date soon.

Good story, I can't wait to see where you're going with this.. Update soon. :D

Wow...this one is gonna be good I can tell. Can't WAIT for the next chapter! Please update soon!

Dude
Write more.

NOW.