sex sex and more sex i love it

Its good! I liked it!

great story! wait! did u say that was u and your friend!

the dialogue was so jumbled together, I couldn't even get through the second paragraph. Everytime another character is talking, you should shift that line of dialogue to the next line :D that way it will be less confusing.

*twitch*
It was well written...*twitch*...detailed...

of course someone would come and mess up their 'fun' afternoon.
i like shika w/kiba.
the spacing for this is a little awkward. it made the conversation a little hard to follow, but you told a great story.