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mandrakefunnyjuice 2008-09-07 ch 9,	abuseTotally insane you are. Talking like Yoda I am today. Five gold stars you shall recieve. Freaked out am I at my grammar.
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight 2008-09-05 ch 9,	abuseI am...amused.
Toyax 2008-09-04 ch 9,	abuseAWESOME! KRATOS IS YOUNG! YAY! And what is Mithos' stone? Wierd!
zigyy553 2008-09-03 ch 9,	abuseBWAHAHAHAA!! Dear god that was funny! I started choking! I keep imagining a 7 year old Kratos doing that though!
Dr Forster 2008-09-03 ch 9,	abuseWow I did not see that one coming : p I assumed it would be a Kratos and party but young Kratos, old Lloyd dn party is very Freaky (in a good way) More plot twists please : p
SilverMoon888 2008-09-02 ch 9,	abuse-shocked- OH. MY. GOD!! Did you just do what I think you did? -bursts out laughing- Up-update soon!!
Evanescent17 2008-09-02 ch 9,	abuse-cackles- Oh, that's wonderful, darling! Wonderful! You are my hero. Now I can drool over an imaginary Kratos and not feel like a senophile. oh, big words are fun. I don't know if that's even a word but it is now. =P Anyways, I loved it. Sorry I don't review so often. I have limited time to read and usually can't write a review in a minute. XOXO -Evie
Frozen In Flight 2008-09-02 ch 9,	abusethats ok ^_^ we embrase the insanity! WElcome to the club! hugs ... hugs again for hte Teen!Kratos >_> we love you all the same.. ^_^
Penamesolen 2008-09-02 ch 7,	abuseThis is Penamesolen again. Because my computer decided to hate me, only a part of the review for chapter nine came. Since it won't let people review a chapter twice, I found the closest chapter I hadn't reviewed to continue. I'm sorry for it all TT.TT -“...HEALING CIRCLE!”- … Genius, Raine. Cry out the name of the spell like that when you’re breaking out of prison, trying to find the way out of there while angels are around there and may detect suspicious sounds like that. Really genius =D …But nobody heard it
Penamesolen 2008-09-02 ch 9,	abuse-“You're really Mithos' companion from four-thousand years ago?” Lloyd asked.- For some reason, this feels weird. Kratos appears, tells them stuff, and Lloyd just switches tema like that? I know he did it in the game, as well, but in there, he had this tone that suited. The way you wrote this sentence in the story seemed just off. -Kratos' eyes widened. What the hell was he doing here? He wasn't supposed to be down here!- I’ve gotten this before, so I guess I’m being a hypocrite mentioning this, but This looks like it’s told from Kratos’ point of view. Just a sentence before, the view was neutral; like from your own point of view. Suddenly, in the same paragraph, the view switch. It just felt a little odd for me… Sorry ^_^” You know, why did Kratos end up in the same cells? I mean, if they would manage to escape (which they did, anyway), then they would without doubt take Kratos with them. If Yggdrasil was smart, he would have put Kratos in his own isolated cell in Vinheim, away from the others. Because Kratos is Origin’s Seal, the source of Mithos’ power, one would think the Cruxis leader would be protective of him, right? Can’t take any chances, especially not with the incident fifteen years ago ;) (and even if he DID have Kratos there, why didn’t they have any guards? Makes me wonder just how in the world Yggdrasil managed to rule in four thousand years, you know) And it’s not that it’s my business, or that I care, but how do one see the difference in one who’s unconscious and one who’s sleeping? I don’t know… Kratos cares for Lloyd, I know that. But I think he cares for him that way that he won’t be near Lloyd. If he hates himself, and he thinks that it was because Anna was together with him that she died, wouldn’t he then try to keep distance from Lloyd, because he believes that he would only bring danger with him if he disobeyed Mithos and followed Lloyd? It may just be me and my family-fluff thing, but still… -“...HEALING CIRCLE!”- … Genius, Raine. Cry out the name of the spell like that when you’re breaking out of prison, trying to find the way out of there while angels are around there and may detect suspicious sounds like that. Really genius =D …But nobody heard it
Alaia Skyhawk 2008-09-02 ch 9,	abuseLOL, good one! Happy writing :D Alaia Skyhawk
I.K.A. Valian 2008-09-02 ch 9,	abuseAside from descriptions, which would have helped this chapter a lot, this wasn't that bad. Though I kinda guessed what was going on a couple chapters ago... hehehe. Anyway, I wonder how Kratos is going to find that creature again (or the spell it uses) and how Lloyd is going to find a way to return to normal. I doubt that Yggdrasil is going to pop back up after he's killed just to turn Lloyd back. (Though if he did, that would be really weird and funny at the same time). All things the same, the Eternal Sword can fix anything, hehehe... or make it worse. Mwahahahahahaha... Next up, the Flanoir Scene... I wonder how that's going to play out now that Lloyd's the adult in the family... that picture is just so wrong... What would really screw this story around would be if in searching for the cure for Lloyd and Kratos, the entire group is affected and everyone become older or younger (or ancient?). Now that would be entertaining to see a 90 year old Zelos fighting with a 5 year old Raine and a 459 year old Genis, Sheena would be PMSing all the time at 45, Presea could be her true age and Regal would be... well, even if he was 88 years old, he'd still be a buff monster of manliness and kick in the face prowess... Who am I forgetting... I don't think Colette would age... She did complete the Angel Transformation and received the Rune Crest so wouldn't that mean she's a full angel and stopped aging? ~I.K.A. Valian
Holy Spork 2008-09-02 ch 9,	abuse...0.o ...At least Kratos' personality appears to have remained intact. And I'm I the only one worried about that 'furkiol' stuff? I know that's going to come into play soon. I must confess I giggled when Kratos tripped. Yes, one does wonder why the universe didn't just collapse. >.> This actually reminds of another fic I read once, where Kratos and Lloyd switched bodies. Now the son appears to be older than the father... o.o
PinkPenguin18 2008-09-02 ch 9,	abusehahahahahaha I would laugh too I love Kratos and Lloyd stories!! (I think you are reading mine...) Update soon! x
youknowwhatman 2008-09-02 ch 9,	abuseVery funny ending, LOL!

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