Oh! I love this! For some reason I can really see Michael tagging along with Stark, trying to get him out of trouble and rolling his eyes behind his client's back.

Yay! Burn notice!.

...I really have nothing more constructive to say. It's a fun premise; I think that the meeting between Michael Westin and the main characters in Iron Man could be an interesting experience.

But only if he got to keep switching identities every other chapter.

Excellent work, your Michael is spot on and I rather enjoyed it!

LOL Oh dear, Michael really should have read up about Tony before glibly saying yes to their offer! Sequel please? *still snickering as I beg*

Hi that was a very good story.

yes, i think ive read the full version on LJ it was very good

Oh! Nice job. I like this a lot. :D

You are going to do a follow up story right? Cuz if you don't, i'll sent my rabid plot bunnies to come and knaw at your brain stem

Oh! Please continue this!! It looks so awesome!

Update? pretty please :)

Wow. This is gonna end up being slash, isn't it? Please contine! This is so good!

I love it. I really like Burn Notice a lot and frankly Shield be right Tony be a pain and I think Michael be begging to go home to Miami in a week. I hope there are sequels.

Lisa

Interesting... Let's go to west...

Very interesting little story you've gotten here. I'd have liked it to be longer, and would certainly like to see more chapters.

In another plus point, (though I know nothing, and I mean nothing about Iron Man) the Burn Notice aspects seemed to stay true to the points of the story. Bravo.