Awh! *huggles Karou and Hikaru* that was so cute! *hands cookie* Excellent job! I really loved it.

it's not crap I would almost call it beatiful but that would just be cliche wouldn't it

aw. i really like it. it really explains the brothers relationship.

That was... wow... I can't describe it! It's.. I don't know... it

's PERFECTION! .. Ok maybe not perfection, but like close enough to rival it? Anyways, it was awesome.

I love this. It's actually really good. Though for future reference, read over after you finish it to get any sentence structure mistakes, or grammar. And if you can't find anything wrong, ask a friend to do so as well. (I only saw a few mistakes.)

Really very wonderful, I think I'll take some elements of this to add to my own fic (not published). That is, if you don't mind- it's a compliment, really. Anyway, Kaoru is such an angst-bucket. Thanks for portraying it.

Oh finally something that's not yaoi... this is really well written and it captures Kaoru's character quite well. In my opinion anyway

I hope you'll be writing more and this isn't just a oneshot...but whatever it stands as a oneshot too... P

Wow, this was VERY good :D *HUgs Kaoru.