   Touch of the Wind 1/18/11 . chapter 3Nice |
| David Fishwick 7/26/08 . chapter 3 Nice story and thanks for writing. |
| Enfleurage 7/13/08 . chapter 2 Definitely an intriguing 1st two chapters, good detail, obvious research, and good characterization. I'm curious to see where this goes. |
| David Fishwick 7/11/08 . chapter 2 Cool chapter and please update soon. Is there any romantic plans for Connor? Thanks for writing and you are a good author. |
| cHoCoLaTe-cHiHuAhUa 7/10/08 . chapter 1 Oh, this looks very interesting. And you succeeded in cheering me up, thank you! I can't wait for more. I'm SO glad that you decided to write more in this universe. |
| David Fishwick 7/8/08 . chapter 1 Nice idea and please update soon thanks. |
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