 cloclo neechan 2008-07-09 . chapter 1it's beautiful from Shinou! ^^ even if murata deserved it |
 Nienna 2008-07-08 . chapter 1Beautiful! I'd love to read more Shinou x Daikenja from you! :3 Thank you for posting it! |
 TrunkZy 2008-07-08 . chapter 1Oh that was lovely and sweet.
“I am sorry about the wait” just did it for me. Typical Shinou. I am glad that despite this being a deathscene you managed to write an ending that put a smile on my face. |
 kirayasha aka kira 2008-07-08 . chapter 1This was a beautiful fic and a lovely look at the Great Sage in the last moments of his life. It's a pity it didn't win the drabble contest. *sighs* |
 Raserei Hojo 2008-07-08 . chapter 1What a lovely story... It's amazing what beautiful words can be written in only a mere 500 words. |