Coolness. Good story. With this kind of adaption additude, you can easily see Koga leading his pack on into the future years. Not easily, of course, but alive nonetheless.
You wrote it really well. Good job.
Sable M.

Good job. was very interesting.

An impressive look at Koga the true and effective leader. A side of him we were rarely shown in the manga or the anime.

Well my dear you've done it again! I don't usually bother with K fics mainly because I'm a lemon fiend... BUT I love your work so I thought I'd give it a try. It's as beautiful and brilliant as always and you cover the characters so well! Wonderful job and PLEASE keep up the good work(Cookies for you!)

Well done! I adore Kouga. Sad that he didn't really get an ending in the manga, but I'm afraid your bittersweet tale is most likely what became of him. I like the maturity you gave him and the depth of his heart that is evident in this tale. Kouga rocks!

Wow! A totally different perspective on Koga! I do think this is the sort of demon he will eventually become, given that Naraku or Inuyasha doesn't kill him first...

Very touching, to be honest. I've always liked Koga, though I can't say I favor him over Inuyasha. It's kind of the same way I feel about Ranma and Ryoga, which makes sense, considering they're by the same author)