im only on chapter one so far, and its s good start, i just have one question: how does she know about diagon ally and what death eaters are if she's been locked in a dungeon most of her life away from most human/magical contact?

it was a weird concept at first glance but you seem to have managed to carry it off well I'm wawiting to read the sequel too

Tom died? no thats absolutley...mahaaw...i dont want him to die!! and draco too? aw man...x)but he will be back? i absolutley loved the chapter...and tom and rains daughter...and i'll be waiting for the sequel!!

May the Dark Lord have mercy on my soul. Am I the only one here that just wanted to switch roles with Rain here? I need a cold shower.

YES! Dumbledore is dead!...hum...never thought I'd ever hear those words come out of my mouth..well anywhoo...lovely chapter i loved it!

I love this story but you need to work on your Grammar. I am also a college student ,and I found the book Grammar Girl's quick and dirty tips for better writing by Mignon Fogarty. To be of great help. Innogen of The Ossuary

YES! she's pregnant...yay...and back at riddle manor...for a while...and i sure hope they take down dumbledore soon...x)

Hm...a dark haired male watching rain and tom...and a glowing at her stomach? pregnant perhaps? and tom came to hogwarts and everyone hates hermione! yay...:)

I'm totally loving your story! I've never seen this kind of plot before and I like it :D Can't wait till the next chapter.

update soon
Miranda :D

Ah! I was mentioned in the An...how wicked is THAT? and yes Poets is an AMAZING band...and I will check out that band...have you heard their new album revolution roulette. it is amazing.
amazing chapter. herminoe is a bitch. draco and harry finally together...and rain...i mean maria ;p needs tom...lets just hope he shows up! luved it!

oh...lovely chapter! and i dunno how fast the time at hogwarts should go...but her popularity should develop not too fast...and it would be awesome if harry approached draco...i dunno why...but i just think that would be cool...awesome chapter...
Ta!-Snuffles-sweetie

oh!! creepy guy appears and...makes them man and wife? and changes rains image...im abit confused..but it was really cool!!

i really like it...i cant help but like the fact that dumbledore is evil in this story...becuse well...his seemed no-fautls persona in the first six books really bugged me...and i just luv the stories where he's portraied differently...

Hey, I just started to read this story and I enjoy reading it. You should update it soon.

very interesting plot...i like it...dumbledore...thats the evil cousin...right? really interesting...:)