Good chapter. Glad to see the update! =)

yay for updates^^
lovely thanksgiving gift!

Wow, I don't remember how long it's been since I looked at this story. I had to reread the other chapters before I got to this one. I'm excited for the next chapter, I hope it'll come faster. I don't have any critique for technicalities or the such, but I think there was a slight error when you tried to use itallics in two parts--

"Hitsugaya would never -- inever/i -- "
and
"She wouldn't cry now. iNot now/i"

I figured out what the problem was so it didn't bother me too much, but some people could get confused and you probably wouldn't want this up. So,... yeah. Great story, my only sadness is that it's almost over. I'm glad you make long chapters.

OMG you actually updated this has made me so happy. Just what I need. My work announced upcoming layoffs and this just made today a good day even with the new stress. Please don't take as long to update again. Thanks :D

This chapter blew me away again. You have done a fantastic job of describing a broken Hitsugaya slowly coming back together, and I look forward to the new one. =)

Good story. You do a good job of describing Toshirou's inner conflicts and Hyourimaru trying to get him to remember.

Nice chapter. It was pretty good even though it took like forever. I liked how you showed the fact that Hitsugaya fought for others and not for himself, and how important you made it in your story. The pacing and paragraph structure was really good too.

Keep up the great work!

Intense.
Every other Aizen-trauma fic Ihave ever read was about how Momo struggled to fight off the betrayal... having her being Hitsugaya's support instead of the other way around its one heack of an interesting change, totally refreshing and very, very interesting if I may add^^
Really cool, will be on the look-out for moree!!
Gchan.

I know it has been a while since you updated this stroy but please please continue I am your number 1 fan. I can be even more cheesy if it will make you continue...that aside this is the best most unique Hitsugaya fiction i have ever read and I want to know where it goes from here.

Very intriguing fic, this one. The fragmented style you use when writing Hitsugaya perfectly reflects his state of mind, especially in contrast to the more flowing, together style of the other characters. Looking forward to more.

Wow. This is beautifully written, and heartbreaking for Toshiro fans (like myself ^_^). I found your page through Dread Pirate Rinja's stuff, and since I like her work, I decided to check your stuff out too... and I was not disappointed. I await the next update eagerly!

this story is really well written... poor hitsugaya though =/
hope that you can continue it soon!

Shadows gathered in the corners, billowing outward, rolling along the floor.

Creepy word imagery! You do know how to set the tone, that's for sure.

Poor dragon! Heartbreaking to read of his despair, the way he tries so hard to reach Hitsugaya, and poor Hitsugaya too! "Confused" doesn't begin to cover his state of mind.

By the way, watch out for its/it's errors. Remember "it's" is a contraction for "it" plus "is", not a possessive.

I absolutely LOVE this story. It's awesome. Hitsugaya without Hyourinmaru, how could he be sane? I love the concept, and the style, and everything, really.

I'm so intrigued by it all. I'm rooting for him to remember it all, to gain back his resolve... It's so well played that I'm really getting into it.

Please, oh please, update fast.

awesome! update again plzz...really soon!