 Ray-spirit 2009-11-19 . chapter 1That was an impossibly cute and totally believable encounter-morphing-into-relationship between Katara and Zuko. And I liked the AU.
I'm still a fan of them (despite how the show ended...), and this was a nice treat to read. :) |
 Apo 2009-10-28 . chapter 1 Awe!awesome! |
 younggem 2009-07-02 . chapter 1this one didn't fail to amaze me as well as all your others.
maybe even more |
 tigerlark 2009-06-07 . chapter 1 This was a really great fanfiction! I thought you captured the essence of each character extremely well, especially Toph and Aang. I found myself laughing out loud at some points and holding my breath at others. Excellent! ^^
The only critique I have for this is one concerning spelling. You should make sure to proofread your final draft more carefully before posting it because some of the pronouns were ambiguous (such as "he" instead of "she", etc.)
Other than that, the content was great!
Looking forward to reading more from you soon.
Tigerlark |
 AcerGirl 2009-05-23 . chapter 1I like it!! |
 HP-anime-girl 2009-05-17 . chapter 1this was pretty good.
im gonna favorite it. |
 zutarababe 2009-05-15 . chapter 1lmao this is the BEST story ever period |
 Jen 2009-03-20 . chapter 1 Hey =)
just ... FANTASTIC ... Luv it |
 Fuu-Namine 2009-03-15 . chapter 1 Wow, I love this story! You write great! Loved every part of it :D |
 molly 2009-03-04 . chapter 1 good twist on avatar. present day. like it. you should write more. hope you do. oh, and I'm glad you didn't have any Kataang in it like almost every other freakin fanfiction. zutara all the way! |
 Lykara 2009-01-17 . chapter 1Heh, this was really great. Loved it a lot. |
 Yucina101 2009-01-11 . chapter 1I liked it. very amazing story. |
 Lealfaithful 2008-12-06 . chapter 1ok, that was REALLY good. the whole jeans thing was very random, but it made a good story! haha, i luv toph she just seems to have that...bam! idk wat 2 call it. but anywho, *claps* very well done.
~!Leal! |
 Limey 2008-11-12 . chapter 1 Oh, wow, I just found this and absolutely LOVE it!
I could probably submit a more coherent and thoughtful review, but I'm still grinning like an idiot. :D |
 SporadicInsanity 2008-10-22 . chapter 1Ek! I love it! :D AU's can be either disastrous or great, and you nailed it. The characters were spot-on, and I love the setting. Very creative. :] |