This was absolutely adorable.

thumbs up! (:

damn, i just had to review even if i ahve to clue as what to say

definetely gotta love the earl and the floating umbrella

Lavi, OOC? No freakin' way. That was the greatest awkward and scared Lavi I've seen. XD And oh, the Kanda-ness. Kanda was so Kanda it was like... whoa! Loved how he complained about Lavi's loud thinking and the loud heartbeats. x''D

And I especially adored the part about the Earl that kept popping up. If Lavi would've accidentily said it aloud though, I'd laugh like hell. xP

Awesome job, seriously.

AHAHAHA!! Lavi?! OOC?! Nah, hehe, that's Lavi..on the inside. His TRUE feelings XD how they SHOULD be.. and are XD Perfect! Thanks for writting it :D made my day!

Lol! Loved that running gag with the Earl and his unmbrella! And loved this, through and through. I loved how you wrote it, really. Thanks a bunch for sharing!

Kyah! I loved it!

ROFL! I just had to review this!! Hahaha, that was so funny! And also very very smexeh! Lawls... Lavi looking out the window, thinking that he might catch a glimpse of a surrendering Earl, while Kanda is undressing! - HAHAHAHA, hilarious! -Totally favorites-
I can so imagine that!! Ho ho ho, you just brightened my day!

Love Naro

um, I have no idea how I missed this fic but I'm so glad I found it XD
This was written so well, and I don't think Lavi was THAT much OOC, actually ^.^ And even if he was, it was still great anyway :D
I happened to see that you were doing a sequel to this (that's actually how I found it, haha) so I don't even have to ask for one now, so yay! ^.^

No matter what I'll say later about the sex scene and how I loved the lines, my favorite line was "It smells like books." Now, getting to the Kanda-ness, so perfect.

Sex scene? HELL YES! It was sexy, sexy, and made me think of that song "Sexy Little Lover". Hm, I love how you portrayed Lavi. He was so accurately emotional and I don't think he's OOC at all.

I loved this so much! Thank you for contributing to the general population of Lavi/Kanda fics! :D

looved it

that sex scene, the passion, the movements, the thoughts - all so hectic, all so well portrayed (that phrase: "Lavi thought his heart was going to break when Kanda cried his name." was so well placed i adored it)

i dont believe they were oc, well kanda accepting this kind of situation will always be oc, but in the realm of the possible, and lavi acted as freaked out as the canon character would had if kanda suddenly blushed (yeah, i adored that too)

so good job!!
(come on, dont let the muse dry! - can you tell im a rabid RK fan?) lol

thanks for the story

Awesome. That's the only coherent thing I can say for now.

"the Earl with his floating umbrella and unconditional surrender"


best line ever xD

I love this story!

ESPECIALLY Kanda xDD

Haha. That was good!

Sorry for being this late. I've read it a week ago but I didnt have time that moment.
Just wanna say that it was so sweet, and deep, and wonderful, and I love it! Really!
Yuu was so cute here, neh? It was fun n interesting reading it. Thanks for writing~