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Reviews For: Rachel's New Man

Mt. Annapurna the Small
2008-07-19
ch 1,
abuseim? Really, you should know better. But, the storyline is good. Have fun writting the next bit. (HINT,HINT!)
Ellasyn
2008-07-13
ch 1,
abuseStars and Moons! DOOFUS! 'hey im Ben?" is your english teacher that bad- i'm having her next year (ah)

miss you lots, this is a great story, well done xx i'll try and meet up with you later, like i said, i'm DYING here, stuck by myself.

well done x ( yeah,. i changed my name again, i used to be KeepressOfNovels, but im sure a clever gal like yourself should've guessed!)
x
13CAT13
2008-07-12
ch 1,
abuseOkaii extremely wierd but it is a brilliant storyline and this is qiuet true and i think that people would watch this if it was a real seris!
Echante
2008-07-08
ch 1,
abusehaha funny!
Republic-Of-Heaven
2008-07-08
ch 1,
abuseAw! cute.

You dreadful young girl (ha-I'm allowed to say such things about you!) what does 'im Ben' mean?

Has your english teacher taught you nothing?

ROH

PS. And you want to move up a set...
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