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| wifeforlife 2008-07-09 ch 1,  | abuseThis was very interesting reading... I am quite curious about James' involvement...how he came to be around Alice..etc. Please do continue your story! It is very good. |
| L.M. Wilson 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI am insanely jealous I didn't write this fic! It is amazing- told with the simple, yet bluntly honest words of a child, it really makes the reader see what Alice lived through. Stephanie Meyer could have written this- though it’s not in her style- it is that good. So, instead of raving about how amazing you are forever, I'll just fav this and be on my way. Excellent work!! ~L.M. (( BTW- I'd love to see the next bit!! )) |
| Momentarily Infinite 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing. Like, really really good. Often I read stories set this far back, and they don't sound right at all. But you've gotten everything perfect. I especially love how her dad's sort of psychotic, but her mother doesn't know what to think. I hope you do another part to this, as I think it'll really tie up the story well. Clyde x |
| oXXb00kw0rmXXo 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh, that was truly amazing. I teared up as I read it, but that only meant that it was well written. The things her father and the other children said and did were horrible, cruel, but it seems realistic. Please write more. I'd love to see her time at the asylum. |
| flowermasters 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseVery good writing, although their father seems a wee bit old-fashioned to me, but whatevs. |