Reviews for Loss and Victory

Emmanovi
2008-07-08
ch 1,

abuseAww, the thought of those trapped creatures... the good God in me is crying out for them to be freed.

And the evil God in me is quite excited by Saitaku's villager-ripping. Most excellently devilish of her. Hehehe.

Also, Toku "had unleashed a furious attack on the pillars and the enemy creature" - despite having only just settled in this land. Meh. Also, we're not told about this attack... in contrast to your past descriptions of Gods battling, which have been really enjoyable reading!

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