Her dreams were beautiful, and so are your words.

Why are you so proud of posting an unbeta'd story that you brag about it in your notes? Why are you so proud of "not even thinking about" whether your writing in a British fandom seems appropriate? Why do you hate capital letters? Is it that hard to hit the shift key? You might think you're using this cool style that will make your writing look so special and better than anyone else's but really you just can't be arsed to make your story properly readable. All lower case writing is stupid and pretentious. Get over yourself.