I've just never been able to get into the Narnia stories, but this short story was marvelous, and I was in tears by the end. Good job. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. The combination was fantastic. Great one-shot. Keep writing!

This is so bittersweet. I love it.So was she always a witch? Or was it the magic of Narnia that allowed her to be a witch?

In a way I would love a response to this review, but it is not needed. To start it up I have to ask have you ever read anything by Neil Gaiman and if so have you ever read his short story The Problem of Susan?

I think if you have my review will be rather mute. In the begining it have a very similar atmosphere. It was a well convaided (I spelt that horrible) sense of lose and dispaer. Susan comes out as a character that is forever stuck in a place she can not hope to leave. Yet by the way you intermixed Albus in this stirred the hope and calmed the agony. I guess the best way I can say it is that they seemed fragile and broken... Human in a way that rarely neither comes across in canon or even fanon. A well fix persoinlty that if possible could have been touched if only one wished to reach out. Granted you took the liberty of taking form a remarkable base for MoGonnagall, but you convied her well.

I just seem to be rambling more now so I'll move on and thank you for a remarkable oneshot that helped clear the cobwebs of mistrust in a fandom that lately have been filled with one and two dimensional personalities.

I did not like the beginning overmuch and felt the "finding of the wand / magical shop" somewhat clumsy.

However the main part of the story developed well and I especially loved the idea and handling of the Susan growing into Minerva. The ending with the lost queen getting the lost Narnian's home was simply wonderful.

thank you

Aww, that was wonderful! It made me teary eyed.

Wow...

I haven't seen Prince Caspian, and I have never read the Chronicles. But I grew up on the animated version of LWW and loved the new movie.

This was... I was bawling half the time. All 6'2' 300lbs male of me was bawling as I read it.

Thank you for this gift.

GML

That was wonderful. A perfect balance of bitter and sweet. Thank you very much for writing it!

Cid

My GOD! WHAT A STORY!

Beautiful...simply and exquisitely beautiful work, Mystical Magician. Between the detail you have used and the heartbreaking plot points, you have crafted something greater than a crossover between two major fantasy series.

Beautiful. Thank you.

beautiful; that's all I can say, just beautiful. Thank you for sharing this.

red

WOW! That is all I call say to this. I always loved the Chronicles of Narnia when I was a kid. And Loved Harry Potter for some similarity between the two. I thank you for combining the two.

Oh, this is beautiful. This is Susan at her most strong and hopeful, and Minerva at her best. I never would have thought to combine the two before now, but now I'd swear it as canon, it's so well done. This is what I didn't even know I wanted to read until today, and you made it one of my new favorites. Fantastic.

dat was AMAZINGG!:)