Oh dear. That was amazing.

I like the way you wrote the interaction between the characters, and also that the story is told from Snape's point of view - that is not very common.

I thought the end was a bit rushed, somehow. The last sentence is brilliant, though.

No why did Harry have to die. so sad, so well written, i love stories where Snape gets alone with harry in the end. but there often written very sappy, or about slash, witch I'm not a big fan of. anyway i loved it. so sad thought. i know i know i already said that. i also wanted to tell you the reason i asked if it was you in your profile pic, was because i thought you just took a pic of a model you liked and put it up. some people do that. anyway great story. later dude.

WOW! That was...amazing!

I have to say that I didn't really understand what was going on in this story. I was left rather confused as to what conspired, when. It was, however, rather well written regardless. I certainly enjoyed Harry's impertinent attitude, which Snape deserved fully here. *sighs*

That's sad

Wow, this is very... interesting. I like it. Good job.

aww, i teared up a bit at the end. It was really good. way to go.

OH WOW! Your Snape was phenomenal! You portrayed him awfully well and your story line was very good. I liked the way you set it up it made me think of these old detective shows, the tone you used. It might de me though;p. I especially liked the ending. Fantastic work!

I thought it was excellent... until you killed Harry. Why did you do that, you cruel boy or girl? Another thing was that, I don't think Snape would be this honest with himself. Still, it was almost perfect... I was going to ask you to continue, no matter what, but well... Suit yourself.

I liked that. I think you did really well with keeping Snape in character.