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zutaraforeva
2009-10-10 . chapter 1
you have to wite more i loved it. i can twait to hear a bout what happens when two opposite ekements come together to make a child
Er?
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
Does Katara get her bending back?
youngquil
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
Dramatic! I love dramatic! But seriously, I could hug you for writing something heavy and worth reading. It's come to my attention that almost every Avatar writer seems to be a teeny bopper with no idea how to write something on this degree of drama and seriousness. Very nice. I liked how you explained the whole contrast of the elements thing, and how it messed with everything about her pregnancy. Smart thing, dear. Though I'm usually not supportive of the whole "GACK!fireandwaterdonotmixiamsickanddying!!' deal, I found this one terribly well done. Very good job if you could get me to change my stance, if even temporarily.

I especially like the baby's name. Wen Tian. It has a nice ring do it :) My own personal Zutara bratlings don't get to boast such wonderful, creative names. I mean, Kanaan and Hana? They're just disgusting when compared. It oddly reminds me of Lu Ten's name. No real reason why. Maybe it's the double moniker thing. I have no idea.

Once again, good job ^_^
Toph13139
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
UoU.. So amazing! And when Zuko was dragged out of the room, wow that part almost made me cry... But my mom was nearby, so... Amazing fic.
AryaEragonPrincessShadeslayer
2008-12-30 . chapter 1
Aw
Such a good story
Scared me there for a second
MizJoely
2008-10-27 . chapter 1
Strong and dramatic and angsty. Well done.
inkfinger
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
naw!! So sw-sw-et!!
diego12191
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
Wow. This was incredible. I don't know if you've wrote other Zutara's but I'll be sure to look.
KShires09
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
This is totally amazing. Good work!
The actions of all the characters were really spot-on.
I'll be sure to check out some of your other stuff.
Onba
2008-09-29 . chapter 1
I love Zutara spawn! *drool*

I can just imagin what Pakku said about Zuko! "How dare that *beep* do THAT to MY grad-daughter! When I get my hands on him I'm going to freeze his *beep* to the ceiling! Then I'm going to-! *rables on*"
hoeoverbros
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
I loved it! Great job!
Firithnovwen
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
i loved it, really had the emotions going
White-Dragon-of-Hope
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
very interesting, I enjoy the way you write this. Update soon!
animerocx55
2008-07-27 . chapter 1
I LUV IT!
BrittMarie
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
Beautiful. *wipes eyes*
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