Reviews for The Mako Special

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Fire Behind Your Eyes 2008-08-18 ch 14,	abuseOK firstly I want to apologise: I've been reading this for ages but haven't reveiwed which makes me very mean. I just never know if I should review like right in the middle of a story, so I try and get to the end before I review but people keep updating (which is GOOD) so I never get to the end of what's up in time...does that make any sense? :) Anyhow: this is absoutely fabulous! I found it compeltely by accident looking for something decent to read and am so happy I did. I love CloTi and since reading Modern Day Love (yes, I have actually read it too, not just saying so) I love modern versons of CloTi. The way you do Cloud is just too perfect and you seriously make me want to hug him, which is the impression I get of his actual character. Tofa has the right plan, just hug him out of his stoicism, works every time! So just to say that this is a great story. It's so easy for fanfic to be unoriginal but this is totally original and shows how ace a writer you are. It's funny, it's moving, it's punchy, it's long, it's really well written and it's kept me well and truly entertained throughout my summer holidays. Thank you! I send you lots of hug vibes! Keep writing! Write more! I may have to become crazy fan person! Thank you! ...Gods that was a long comment! :)
Plushietiger 2008-08-16 ch 14,	abuseWow great story! Who cares about their/they're and other grammer junk when the storyline is awesome? I LOVED the combat race it was AMAZING. So... much... tension between Tifa and Cloud... Well update soon :3
goatgod 2008-08-16 ch 14,	abusei love this fic! and who cares about some stupid typos! so long as the story kicks ass then it don't matter! and good luck with moving. ja ne!
MK4.Longfang 2008-08-13 ch 14,	abuseWHERE'S RED?! Anyway, another good chapter, albeit slightly cheesy and clichE. The idea of the protagonist being the one to stand up to the 'Boss' is a wee bit overused, but I can see why you did it. Another thing I've noticed is the use of commas. I'm no Grammar Nazi, but it tends to stop the flow of a story by popping in too few.
Sacred3 2008-08-11 ch 14,	abuseCool chapter, i really like all the assumptions made on Cloud. don't really know why though, maybe because its embarrassing him or frustrating him. Good for Cloud to stand up for himself and Co. Adore the Cloti, can't wait for the nest chapter.
chipmouskin 2008-08-11 ch 14,	abuseWhew! I really wish that I could write a review for all the chapters, but I read this all in one go. I love it, by the way. Mostly, I'm sure I don't have anything more to say than the other reviewers critically - a few grammatical errors here and there that can usually be fixed if you just re-read through the story (which can be a pain, but well worth it in the end). Anyway, the tension between Tifa and Cloud is killing me. O_x;; omfgz. And I love Zack and Aerith too.
Holy Wolf 2008-08-10 ch 14,	abuseWay to go Cloud! About time he stood up for himself. Good job on this chapter. By the way, if you want a beta reader, I'm registered with the beta community here, so if you want someone to give your chapters the grammar/spelling check, feel free to PM me or email me. This is a great story, one of the best AU's I've come across. Anyways, good job, good luck moving. I know your pain, I'm in the middle of doing so too. -Wolf
Epic Popcorn 2008-08-10 ch 14,	abuseI think you also have an issue with 'loose', but many authors here do. They use 'loose' instead of 'lose', which are not the same of course. Its rather bothersome, but I ignored pointing it out because your grammar has been good for the most part. I liked the chapter. I was wondering if ever Cloud and Tifa will get together, but it wouldn't bother me if prolong it, as you do with Zack and Aerith. I sort of like it the way it is.
Shari Joy Rose 2008-08-10 ch 14,	abuseDon't worry, I don't think it looks like you're anti-Aerith, I just personally never liked her in the game so if I'm still not liking her in your story, it probably means she's in character lol Happy moving!
Fairheartstrife 2008-08-10 ch 14,	abuseWhy do I get the impression Rufus isn't done making Cloud miserable? And why do I think Tifa will play a part in that? Hm. Just a feeling, I could be way off. All in all, a good chapter and I look forward to an update!
Shari Joy Rose 2008-08-09 ch 13,	abuseWell I think you got Aerith's personality down pretty well 'cause I don't like her haha.. My only critique I have is you've been confusing your.. 'your's and 'you're's and sometimes your 'there' 'they're' and 'their's =) Not a huge deal, but a pet peeve of mine ^^;;
Fairheartstrife 2008-08-08 ch 13,	abuseSo, the date wasn't a complete disaster, which is good. :) I enjoyed this chapter, and hope to see some more Cloti moments soon. Keep up the good work!
Holy Wolf 2008-08-07 ch 13,	abuseThis story is actually really interesting, good job. Little warning though, watch the your vs. you're hang up and the their/there/they're pit fall. I noticed a few times that they got mixed up, but otherwise the grammar and spelling aren't bad. Keep up the good work. I hope we get another race soon! -Wolf
Sacred3 2008-08-07 ch 13,	abuseLove this chappie, very smooth.
ClotiNotCleris 2008-08-05 ch 12,	abuseyaay I adore your stories too. and great chapter, its getting things movin'!! write more!!

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