This was totally awesome. I loved it that they didn't notice the villains because they were too busy being in love with the Rowdy Ruff Boys. xD You have a great sense of humour, and you're a wonderful author. Good work. *thumbs up*

I don't care about pairings in PPG, because they're superheroes and I don't see why pairings are necessary.

Hello there, I've read your parodies, and it's not that I'm bothered by them, I'm not that stupid, really, but I would like to give a few comments for your "points".

I'm a supporter for RRB/PPG myself, and that is because of these few facts:

1.) The RRB are, like, the only normal (well, physically) guys that can handle the PPG's tantrums (when they have any). Try pairing Mitch with Buttercup, and you'll have a murder in no time.

2.) They're the same age. Hence, no lolicon, pedophilia, or whatever else it's called.

3.) Check out the episode "The City of Clipsville". It was implied that the PPG had crushes on the RRB, and vice versa there.

4.) According to some sources, it is implied that the PPG represents typical little girls, while the RRB represents typical little boys, although they are a few times more extreme. In other words, they are supposed to be matched.

5.) About the color matches, I'm pretty sure that Craig Mccracken had properly considered about the RRB's personalities, and had made them match their counterparts. Hence, it would be proper that they're matched with their counterparts. Plus, if their color is their favorite, it would be a plus mark for their pairs to wear, or have the same color.

Now for your points:
1.) The PPG and RRB meeting in high school
I agree that this is cliche, but as you said, there is no problem with it. And, as you also said, I also agree that most of the plots are trashy and lame. So, no arguments here.

2.) The Girls not realizing who the Boys are and vice versa despite the fact that they all look exactly alike.
No arguments here either. It would be better if the plot is that they already knew each other since they were five, and grew up together while having their romantic build up over the time.

3.) The PPGs and RRBs becoming romantically interested within the very first chapter
Same as no. 2. With an addition. It wouldn't matter if they tried to kill each other when they were five. Again, proved in "The City of Clipsville".

4.) The Boys suddenly becoming good guys with no explanation or build up
"The City of Clipsville". I think most of the people here either forget about that episode, or they didn't watch it. It is shown there that the boys aren't villains anymore, and are living normal lives. I guess it's because they just liked to "play" and "have fun" when they were five. After they grow up, they just sorta "settled down". It's the same as normal children, really. Multiplied by manifolds in extremity.

5.) Both the RRB and PPG forgetting to fly
Yes, that is stupid. Also about the girls getting assaulted by NORMAL HUMAN THUGS.

6.) The Girls completely forgetting crime fighting
This happens in "The City of Clipsville". There are bank robberies, man-eating monsters, etc. happening behind them while they flirted with each other.

7.) Random, unnecessary description of clothes
I don't think this is a problem. True, it gets annoying over time, but it should be fine on special occasions. For example, when they wear formal clothes like dresses and tuxes.

8.) Referring to Buttercup as ‘BC’
Agreed. But, teenagers love nicknames, you know. And they ARE lazy. Heck, my name have only got 2 syllables and my friends called me with 2 letters because the two consecutive consonants makes it harder to pronounce. (I'm not telling you my real name, but for example Krista into KR). You might be bashing innocent authors who aren't actually lazy, but only trying to portray the nature of teenagers properly.

princess robbing a bank lololololololoz

You made the story go to fast... Look, If the PPG`s get romantically intresed with the RRB at the first paragraghs or such...well that sucks. Ease into the story and then build like building blocks. I agree if the RRB becime good they 1) do this as a trick 2) (fangirl thinking) they sincerely feel inlove...but I`d like a reason.I agree work the discripution of clothes into the story. ( sorry for the long comment) :(

So...you're telling me Kaoru was being serious in her review? Absolutely serious? That wasn't sarcasm? Really?

Wow...and she doesn't realize that you're one of those authors? LOL...hahaha...that's hilarious!

Let me know how Jupiter is, eh? :-P

ROFL

Why in front of everybody.There were kids watching.They couldve gone under the pier.And yah most of this stuff was random.
which is awesome

I totally agree with you...why can't people stop being lazy and all(except me). Oh and from the beginning I already thought the story was a parody since this things don't just happen. Like why the hell did each of the PPG and RRB characters fall for each other without beating the crap out of their counterpart first!? It doesn't happen just like that...I didn't actually understand the whole story after you explained it...tehe...but the part the children asked why butch and buttercup were wrestling nakkie made me crack up...

XD jajaja its all i can say XD you're right in a lot of things jajaj and when i read this i was kust laughing a lot XD you really had a pimple in you butt? jajaja XD but the couple mojo/bloss its a little bit creepy in my opinion XD but its original and thats what i counts i was in the floor laughing when you said that the persons that have originality should die or something like that i was like o.O WTF? jaja XD but nice parody

bye

you are WAY to hyper you sick twisted fool!(my fav character is buttercup !how could you do that?)you need to cool down GIRL!

i love this fanfic and no! there should be less romance!

dude that was like random (in a bored voice)...WHICH IS AWESOME DDUDDE ! RANDOM AND HYPER PEOPLE RULE ID HIGH 5 U BUT U HEHE I DONT KNO WHERE U R SO I GUESS THIS WILL DUE!!XD XP

Oh, sorry. I noticed a mistake in my review. :P

this was on the tenth (I know, I wrote a TOO long of a review)paragraph:

'If they were villains the day they were born, why would they suddenly do this as if they were picking vegetables from sweets?'

It was supposed to be sweets from vegetables. Kids NEVER like vegetables. Well, most of them.

Hey, you know, the funny thing about this fic is that I actually THOUGHT you liked PPGxRRB. And I was even more stupid to think that even though I SAW the parody thing, GOD.

Anywho, the first thing that popped in my mind while reading your chapter 1 was 'God, what shit this is...' and when I looked at how many reviews you got, it was way too many for anyone to appreciate this. That's when I saw your review.

You know, the thing is that I actually support this pairing. I dunno, I saw a fic or two where they starred PPG and RRB together and it was simply awesome. I instantly fell in love with the pairing.

But I totally understand what you wrote. So what if they're counterparts? They look alike, and then? That's a fucking stupid reason. And what's so wrong about other pairings? They're all just PAIRINGS, for God's sake! It's not like the sky's gonna fall or anything!

Oh, and when you wrote 'If you're going to write a romance fic featuring a certain pairing, you can't just make them fall in love in the first chapter.' I felt totally struck. I've seen hundreds of fics with them falling in love with each other from the start. It was, like, 'Whoa. They absolutely DESPISED each other and now they're in love?'. That's absolute shit.

And, yes, a lot of the fics I've seen of this pairing are not well-written and awfully OOC.

There's this one: 'Most RRB/PPG shippers just suddenly have the Boys as good guys with absolutely no reason for WHY they suddenly stopped being bad.'

THAT definitely hit me. Most of the stories I read start with the guys being all civil and totally un-rowdy. I admit, I've written fics with that start and before I actually typed it, I thought 'WHY would they act like...THIS all of a sudden?'

I was dumb enough to disregard that thought.

If they were villains the day they were born, why would they suddenly do this as if they were picking vegetables from sweets?

I also definitely agree with you in the part where people should be more open-minded with the other pairings. Why hate them? Do THEY want others to HATE the things they support? Of course, not! So why do they have to talk shit about the other stuff? It's not fair.

But you know, if a lot of stories about this pairing suck then there's even more that don't. I've read so much about them and they just really inspire. They're beautiful, well-constructed and not just another shit outside the trashcan. The authors actually KNOW what they're writing and they do all they can to keep the people in there as in character as possible. The boys stay as the boys and the girls stay as the girls.

What I'm saying is that, even if what you reviewed to yourself was undoubtedly true, it isn't with the other stories. Not ALL of them are crap and not ALL of them are worthless. It's all a matter of looking at one thing that's different. I mean, hey, if you want to hate something, then you WILL hate it, if you try enough to see the good stuff then you will like it, maybe even love it. Most of the PPGxRRB fans looked for the good parts, but most of them are too supportive to not try looking at the OTHER PAIRINGS's good parts.

That's why I never hate or dislike people who support something I don't. It's their opinion and they deserve to be treated the same even if what they like is different. But if they put others down, then THAT'S where you can start hating them.

Everyone's different and everyone likes different things. No one can or should force others to do or like something they don't nor can they put them down.

Everything you've done will shoot back at you, anyhow. That's why there's such thing as KARMA. Let other people like what they like and open your minds just enough to learn to appreciate other things.

Sorry for the very VERY long review XP

Hope I get a reply.

Phenomenal. XD
It's all true, too.
I picked up on the 'BC' thing, too.
It is rather stupid.

Though I am guilty of clothes descriptions, but I don't think it's ridiculously lengthy or anything. Just a random mention. *shrugs*

Wow i read all of them and they were really funny!!
XD
make more soon