Oh, that was so cute, sad and amazing all at once! Just one little fun fact, though. Alchemy actually exists, though not like in the anime. Its just the science of turning one substance into another. And Sir Isaac Newton only studies physics as a hobby. Alchemy was his real obsession despite popular belief. :D Just a random fun fact. Though of it when you mentioned Newton's Laws. Terrific oneshot!

Emma

Wo just wow!

I love how you did Alfonse's PoV! The way you blended it with the movie was wonderfull! It really did seem so Cannon and real!

Woah. I loved this, especially the use of language, it just seemed so... well, romantic, for want of a better word. I also like the way you've portrayed Alfons, very in-character, especially the way he sees Edward, referring to him as "you", it makes the whole perspective seem really intimate and just between those two.
have I talked too much? I hope not, this is definitely one of my all-time favourite stories.

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OMG awesome. I love it. It's so drabble-ish and connected at the same time. Wow. And great choice of words and everything. *faves*

-sniffle- That was so beautiful. You have such a way with words! Excellent job!

Now, I am regularly not a fan of shounen-ai, but this was beautifully written; I have no idea why there aren't any reviews for it so far. I find most shounen-ai fics have too many fangirlish fantasies wrapped up in them, but this...so subtle, so natural-even if I'm not a fan-and it sounds like a logical relationship. Like I said, shounen-ai can be fangirl-dream-ridden, but you have done an excellent job keeping things in character, and your word play is decadent.

You deserve a favourite. Have one, and a cookie. Thank you for making me step out of my canon-shipping boundaries and read this; I never thought there was a relationship between the two, but if I felt there was, then it would probably be like this.