Looking forward to reading more

This was great! Please continue!

Dude! Harsh. Who's the other vampire? And why couldn't Edward save her?

hey this is awesome i cant wait for chapter 2 i need to know what happens to bella hurry up and and write it and good work by the way im impressed

Cool!
Update soon!
-DisneyRBD

OMDE! Im dying to know what is happening (no pun intended) sheesh!! c'mon get to the next chapter!! good story! its very well written!

please update! i just have to know what happens next!

GOD! that's good. like Stephanie Myer herself wrote it. And the cliffhanger! good job. But since you left us hanging please write more!

damn!

really good could use some more descriptive words but very good

OMG Cliffhanger much? Save me, write more!

It seems pretty cool, although I'm VERY eager to see the events leading up to this. Write more please!