 Christine Ruud 2009-01-14 . chapter 1Oh my gosh, this is nuts. I love the last line! |
 dannyyy 2008-10-20 . chapter 1 best finishing line EVER. you win. |
 Suicidal Butterfly 2008-08-30 . chapter 1Oh my god, that was so random! Threesome... it... that... it was... I'm trying so hard to stop laughing, but it hasn't worked yet... Meep! |
 Black Alya Wolf 2008-07-22 . chapter 1HA! Perfect! Sure it wasn't Jack who touched that hand? :) |
 Danni34 2008-07-17 . chapter 1Ha! Loved that last line! I think his twin might have got some of Jack's DNA too, probably go in the hand while he had kept it in Torchwood... Not sure if that made any sense... Still, though, loved it! |
 snapeygirl 2008-07-09 . chapter 1Oh, the last sentence made me laugh.
"So..." he said. "Threesome?"
That is something I picture Jack saying, not the doctor, even the doctor's twin. |
 NewDrWhoFan 2008-07-09 . chapter 1Yup, definitely a bit of crack, although Donna was awesome!
And, of course, that ending is precisely why the show ended the way it did ;) |
 ethelowyn 2008-07-09 . chapter 1 Just two words in response to that last question - Hell Yes! |
 UncleKai 2008-07-09 . chapter 1I salute you. Very amusing Piece. And your Donna is so very much Donna. |
 WeasleyWoman05 2008-07-09 . chapter 1*dies*
I can't get the smile off my face. I love Donna and you've managed to capture her voice quite well. I completely adore the smack she gave him. He so deserved it. Fantastic final line. One of the best I think I've ever read (cause you know we were all thinking it).
More please? :) |
 Anna McNarin 2008-07-09 . chapter 1His twin, channeling Jack! And yes, Donna Noble pwns all. |
 Starlite1 2008-07-09 . chapter 1BWAHAHAHA! FANTASTIC!! Love Donna, you've got her just right, and that was just the kind of thing she would do... XD
Don't suppose you could continue? |
 Kent Rigel 2008-07-09 . chapter 1NuR... *brain deflates* Wha-?
Seriously crack. Crowned royal crack of all that is crackiness.
Meanwhile the last line is funny and yet the most cringe-tastic, yes, that's a word, I have invented it, final line I have ever read. |
 LittleSushi 2008-07-09 . chapter 1ROFL!
Yay this really helps a little bit over the whole angst of the last episode! XDD
Donna is a better driver!? |
 xLaramiex 2008-07-08 . chapter 1lol!
this should so have happened -big grin- |