This story rocks. You know, your vampire's mindset reminds me of (an admittedly wiser version of) Holden Caulfield, and I love Catcher In The Rye, so... yeah.

Well told. Is it your own plot? The voice reminds me of some of those old-style detective stories eg Marlowe and Spade.

Brilliant story! You've got amazing talent. I'm putting this story on my favorites.

This is a good story; and hats off for writing about original characters!

I love reading stories with Original Characters worked into the Buffyverse. There are so few out there that manage to pull it off well, but this one excels. Thanks for the story)

Oh, wow, did I like this. At first I was confused as to the title, because I didn't see how Lorne was going to fit in, but...wow. This was absolutely amazing.

For a dark tale as told from a soulless vampire's point of view this was amazingly enough almost a tear-jerker. You've accurately combined all of the features of a murder mystery, a horrow, and a romance and you've done so while actually giving the vampires a sense of individuality rather than a personality from out of a mould.