great

i really like this story

I don't think that anyone minds id you post the chapter with errors, people can understand them and it's the story that counts!

Cocoa Krispies
Rice Krispies
Kashi
Sugar Bombs
Cheerios
Honey Nut Cheerios
Frosted Flakes
Frosted Cheerios
Cookie Krunch
Fruity Pebbles
Fruit Loops
Etc. etc. etc.!

I have no idea what it means... lol

OH... MY... GOD! I can't believe that Edward is blamed for being the killer!
But now I realized that the killer is either a girl or gay... one of those to, and here I was thinking that it was Toney... Well, it still may be him... Is Toney gay?

corn flakes,count chocula,corn pops, raisin brand, shreddies, cherioes, mini wheat,frosted flakes? gr8 story by the wayy

i dont mind reading things with errors theres nothing wrong with that i just want chapter up! ur good at making suspense and its killing me!

I LIKE IT!

KISSES KISSES that is what will happen! lol

haha, that is a really good idea for a story! lolz! I take it that you liked New Moon (or whatever the title was called lolz)

that was such a great twist at the end! I love it!
They are SO SO SO cute together! OH, and the killer is Edward's dad!
I thought that it was Toney! ha~ that was a nice twist too!
LOLZ

NO NO NO NO NO !
Why can't Toney stop attacking everyone?!
Gosh, he is SUCH a jerkity jerk jerk JERK!

hahaha no I didn't think that it was a vampire! It was so obviously Bella! lolz
Love yas ta peices

I LOVE it! Keep goin' cowgirl! lolz