I love it!

You write the dialogue really nice and naturally- I could imagine it happening like this.

I'm a bit sad that more fanfics don't end with Donna and Hyde just going for it, but I guess it is the logical way of things. Sigh. Oh how I wish there could have been a way for them to get together... oh well.

Really nice fic anyway.

Cute, cute. :) I love this pairing just because of the disco episode. Ah I want a Hyde for myself! XD

i love it! all of the hyde/donna stories are such teases! i hope they get together in the end.

ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! ( if you couldn't tell from the all-caps lol) I love the tension between them in the 1st season and wish they would have kept it that way for a little bit longer.
xoxo,
Diana H.

i always wanted hyde and donna to be together!!

Aw, short and sweet HydeDonna! I love it... I felt so bad for Hyde during season one and this fic is just a really good one representing the HD moments and stuff all during it. Great work!

Hi!
Thanks a lot for this one; I really enjoyed it. I can't think of any "tips for improvement" as is suggested, but I will praise you on keeping true to the mannerisms of Donna and Hyde. Also liked the foreshadowing of Kelso and Jackie.
Once again, thanks!
~Pink Lady Alex

I've been in love with Hyde and Donna since S1.
It's great to see a story that has that pairing!

Aw this was so bittersweet and I loved it. I hope you write more HydeDonna! Keep up the good work!

awe cute! but sad... hopefully she sees him for him:) update soon!

This was very sweet, and I loved the promise of a sequel. The voices were true, and it was a nice little vignette.

Yet again Hyde gets shot down in flames mainly because Donna is already into her scrawny neighbor boy but also because Donna see Hyde as a best friend and if she went down that route she would lose both her best friends.

While I was glad to see an E/D finale, I wouldn't've minded seeing more D/H in the show, esp having that be part of S8.

I'm into D/H a little myself, and I thank you for posting this -- we need it here.

i love donna&hyde coupling ^^
don't let it end here,
keep going!

I think this could use just a tad more description, a bit more of a back history to make Hyde's feelings more real, but all in all, it's a sweet little ficlet and I do like it.